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7 Sensational Essay Hooks That Grab Readers’ Attention

by Suzanne Davis | Jul 14, 2022 | Writing Essays and Papers | 12 comments

Do you want people to feel excited when they read your essay?

The secret is to get them interested in reading your essay by making the first part of your introduction intriguing. The best way to do that is by using attention-grabbing essay hooks.

So, what is a hook? It’s a piece of writing at the beginning of your essay that engages your reading audience. Usually, a hook is a sentence or group of sentences that draw people into reading your essay or research paper. A hook sparks a person’s curiosity. You want whoever reads your essay to wonder what happens next. Hooks also make an introduction stand out (which raises your chance of getting a high grade on your essay).

If you want to see all the elements of great introductions for research papers check my post, How to Write a Strong Introduction to a Research Paper at https://www.academicwritingsuccess.com/how-to-write-a-strong-introduction-to-a-research-paper/.

When you write essay hooks that make your rea ders curious, you’ve taken the first step toward making them fall in love with your writing. Let’s dive in and look at essay hooks that will elevate your writing style!

7 Types of Essay Hooks

Here are 7 writing hooks that make readers want to find out what you will say in the rest of your essay.

Interesting Question Hook
Strong Statement/Declaration Hook
Fact/Statistic Hook
Metaphor/ Simile Hook
Description Hook
Quotation Hook.

1. The Interesting Question Hook

An interesting question hook is when you ask a question that relates to your essay or paper. And the only way a person can know the answer to that question is by reading your writing.

People are inquisitive. When we hear or read a question we want to know the answer. If we don’t have an answer then we need to find out.

So, when you start your essay with a question hook, this signals to your readers that if they keep reading you’ll give them the answer.

Here’s an example of an interesting question hook on the topic of succeeding in college:

What is the difference between successful college students and unsuccessful college students?

The goal of this essay hook is to make you want to learn what students who succeed in college do, and what college students who don’t succeed in college do wrong.

2. The Strong Statement/Declaration Hook

A strong statement hook is a sentence that makes an assertive claim about your topic. It connects to the thesis statement and shows the importance of your essay or paper.

A strong statement is a great technique because it doesn’t matter if your reader agrees or disagrees with your statement. They will want to see how you support your statement.

This is an example of a strong statement on the topic of the vegan diet.

Vegans are the healthiest group of people in the world.

This statement either supports your point of view about the vegan diet, or it makes you want to argue against it (especially if you love meat). Either way, you are curious about what the writer says.

3. The Fact/ Statistic Hook

Facts and statistics hook your reader because they give real information about a topic. You can impress your reader with your knowledge and evidence from the very beginning of your essay. But, you need to include facts that are accurate, interesting, and reliable. Evaluate your information and make sure it comes from a credible source. Some places to visit for statistics are The Pew Research Center https://www.pewresearch.org/ , and The CIA World Fact Book, https://www.cia.gov/the-world-factbook/.

Here’s an example of a factual hook about an essay on gun ownership in the United States.

Almost two-thirds of American adults at some point in their life lived in a home with at least one gun.

The Pew Research Center, “America’s Relationship With Guns: An In-Depth Look at the Attitudes and Experiences of US Adults” http://www.pewsocialtrends.org/2017/06/22/americas-complex-relationship-with-guns/

4. The Metaphor / Simile Hook

The metaphor/simile hook engages your readers because it makes them think about a topic in a different way. Your audience wonders what you mean and how you compare a topic to something that seems unconnected.

A metaphor is a figure of speech that directly compares one thing to another, but these two things seem unrelated. An example of a metaphor is: Her boyfriend is a rat. The boyfriend is not really a rat, but he behaves like one.

If your essay topic is on business blogging you could write the metaphor hook:

A business blog is a magnet pulling clients to a company.

A simile is like a metaphor. Both compare two unrelated things to each other, but a simile uses the words like or as to connect them. A simile is less strong than a comparison in a metaphor. An example of a simile is : Writing a research paper is like running a marathon when it’s 95 degrees Fahrenheit.

A simile hook for the essay about business blogging could be:

A business blog is like a magnet that pulls clients to a company.

5. The Story Hook

This is a hook where you begin with a short story or episode that relates to your topic. Readers love stories, especially a well-written story that is memorable. The key to a great story hook is making sure the story directly connects to your essay or paper topic. Your story can be personal or someone else’s story.

Here’s an example of a story hook for an essay about the differences between British and American English. I used my own story about a trip to England.

I got off the train and pulled my luggage behind me. A cab pulled up to the curb, and the driver got out. He lifted my luggage and said, “Miss, I’m just going to put your stuff in the boot.” I didn’t know what he meant until I saw him open the car’s trunk. Then I realized the boot means car trunk. I got in the cab, wondering how many other words would be different in England.

You’ll see this sto ry hook is longer than other types of essay hooks. That’s okay. Your hook can be longer, but it shouldn’t be a large part of your essay or paper. Compare the length of your hook to the length of the essay.

Also, consider your audience (especially an academic audience). Ask yourself, “Will a story hook be acceptable in this course?” If you’re unsure you can ask your teacher or professor or you could select a different type of hook.

6. The Description Hook

This is a hook where a vivid description of a scene draws your readers into your writing. A good description hook will make your reader want to know what comes next in your writing. It’s most popular in narrative essays, but you can use a description hook with any type of writing (yes even academic papers). But, like the story hook ask yourself, “Will this description hook be acceptable in this course?”

Here’s an example of a description hook for a personal narrative essay about saving a dog:

The dog howled in pain and limped along the side of the road. His leg was cut and blood streamed down his leg.

Doesn’t this scene make you curious about what will happen to the dog?

7. The Quotation Hook

This is a hook where you begin your essay with a quotation. The quotation could be from a famous person, but it doesn’t have to be. You can quote anyone if it connects to what you’re writing about.

If you write an essay on the topic of education you could start

Nelson Mandela said, “ Education is the most powerful weapon you can use to change the world .”

If you want to use a quotation for a hook, make sure you quote the words exactly. Choose quotations where the words are striking, powerful, and/ or memorable.

Writing Challenge: Write 2 Essay Hooks

Essay hooks are a great way to intrigue all your readers. Select your favorite 2 types of essay hooks. Then write a hook for each kind you choose. Comment below and share your favorite one!

Have fun and be creative.

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I find that switching it up makes my content better. My favorite is to start with a question or a strong statement. I love this infographic. Well done!

Thanks Joanne! Question and strong statement hooks are great for getting readers to wonder what’s in your essay. I’m so glad you liked the infographic.

This is a great article, showing the variety of openings you can use in writing. Thank you for the tips!

I’m glad you liked it. I think hooks are great for writing.

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Would you recommend starting with a free platform like WordPress or go for a paid option? There are so many options out there that I’m totally overwhelmed ..

Any suggestions? Many thanks!

Hi Cindy, Those are great questions about blogging. I think the beginning point with starting a blog is determining your niche/focus, goals and your ideal readers. The next piece of advice is to really learn the style of writing blog posts. It’s a craft, so you should really start with a good grasp of the formatting, style, and techniques, etc. Since I don’t know your blog’s focus I can’t offer you more specific advice.

If you can afford it, I suggest paying for a domain name and hosting. There are free ones like WordPress.com etc. These will get you started, but if you want to use your blog for a business I really recommend starting with a paid option. I hope this helps you. Good luck blogging!

Thank you for this informative Eda’ya. My favorite hooks are question, strong statement and the fact. I think these are the best for an academic paper. Your infographic is excellent and memorable. Thank you! 👏🏻

Mehmet, Those are all great hooks! I think they would each be a great way to begin an academic paper too. I’m glad the infographic is useful to you. Thank you for the compliment.

These are great. I’ll have to file this away for my next writing student (and my next blog post!). For research papers, I used to use the fact/statistic hook a lot.

Beth, I’m glad you liked these essay hooks. I like the fact/statistic hook a lot too, and you’re right it is a great one for research papers.

I like question hooks & metaphoric ones…

I need to write to essays for tomorrow at English (preparing for Baccalaureate) & I’ll choose “success is not about luck” & “the importance of music in our lives” …

For the first one I’ll choose the first type of hook (for me it’s the easiest): “How can you be sure that when it comes to success, luck isn’t so important” or sth like this.

But for the second essay I’ll choose a metaphoric hook “music is the spot of light who makes shine in gray tones” or sth like this.

For the first one I was also thinking about sth statistically but idk not a kind of statistics about luck help in success or sth like this…

Ik, you can’t give me advices till tomorrow but I’ll be OK. Thx for this gorgeous inform. God bless you. All the best!

I think those are 2 great hooks to use with those essays. I love the metaphoric hook you came up with–it’s beautiful. I hope you do well with your essays. Good luck!

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200+ Creative Hook Examples: Ready, Set, Hook

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Published on: Mar 22, 2023

Last updated on: Jul 23, 2024

Question Hook Examples

If you're stuck in the creative hook-writing process, a question hook can be your go-to.

Questions hook readers and make them think about whatâs being asked. You can also use a fact statistic too.

They also immediately draw attention to the topic at hand and make readers more likely to continue reading.

Let's look at some examples :

"What if I told you that a single dream could change your life?"
"Who can inhabit a place where the past and the present intersect?"
"How would you respond if you had to choose between love and ambition?"
"Where does one draw the line between passion and obsession?"
"Can humanity survive in a world of conflicting values?"
"What if our dreams became reality?" - John Steinbeck
"How do you explain something that cannot be explained?"
"Is it possible to find true love in an imperfect world?"
"Do we control our destiny, or does fate have a hand in it?"
"How much can power corrupts us before we become monsters?"

Statistic Hook Examples

Numbers don't lie, and sometimes they can be the most powerful way to make a point.

Here are some examples of statistic hooks that can grab your readers' attention:

"Did you know that over 50% of adults in the United States are single?"
"According to recent studies, over 70% of high school students report feeling overwhelmed and stressed on a daily basis."
"In the United States, the average household debt is over $90,000."
"Over 80% of Americans believe that climate change is a serious problem, but what are we doing to address it?"
"According to recent polls, only 20% of Americans trust the government to do what is right always or most of the time."
"In the last decade, the use of social media has skyrocketed, with over 3 billion users worldwide."
"Studies show that women still earn only 82 cents for every dollar earned by men in the United States."
"Over 40% of food produced in the United States is wasted each year, while millions of people go hungry."
"Recent research has found that over 90% of plastic waste in the ocean comes from just 10 rivers in Asia and Africa."
"Despite advances in medical technology, the United States has one of the highest rates of maternal mortality in the developed world, with over 700 deaths per year."

Metaphor / Simile Hook Examples

Metaphors and similes can be powerful tools for engaging your reader and making your writing more vivid.

Here are ten examples to inspire your own metaphorical hooks.

"Like a beacon in the night, [topic] shines a light on our deepest hopes and fears."
"Metaphorically speaking, [topic] is a Pandora's box of complex emotions and ideas that challenge us to confront our own biases and assumptions."
"Just as a ship navigates treacherous waters, [topic] requires a steady hand and a clear sense of direction to navigate successfully."
"In many ways, [topic] is a mirror that reflects the beauty and complexity of the human experience."
"Like a puzzle with countless pieces, [topic] invites us to piece together disparate elements to uncover deeper truths and insights."
"Metaphorically speaking, [topic] is a garden that requires careful tending and nurturing to flourish."
"Just as a painter uses color and light to create a masterpiece, [topic] allows us to paint a vivid portrait of the world around us."
"In many ways, [topic] is a labyrinth that challenges us to explore its winding paths and discover hidden treasures along the way."
"Like a key that unlocks a door, [topic] gives us access to new worlds of knowledge and understanding."
"Metaphorically speaking, [topic] is a journey that takes us on a winding path through the highs and lows of the human experience."

Anecdote Hook Examples

If you want to hook your readers from the start with a narrative that's more fun and lighthearted, an anecdote hook is a way to go.

Let's look at some examples:

"It all started when I decided to take a walk in the woods one summer day..."
"The night began as any other night out with my friends - until the police showed up..."
"The day I found out my grandmother had cancer was one of the saddest days of my life"
"It was a sunny Sunday afternoon when I decided to take a chance and go for a drive on an unfamiliar road"
"I never expected that one day I'd be standing in the World Cup final..."
"It was summertime, and all my friends were out at the beach while I was stuck inside baking cookies"
"I remember the day I finally decided to take a leap of faith and start my own business"
"My first day at university was filled with anxiety and excitement"
"That's when I realized I wanted to be a teacher - when I saw the look on my student's faces after they finally understood something"
"My first time walking into a yoga class was nerve-wracking, but it ended up being one of the best decisions of my life"

Quote Hook Examples

If you want to hook your readers right away with a strong introduction, using a quote hook can be an effective strategy.

Let's look at some examples of a quote from a famous person.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars" - Oscar Wilde
"To infinity and beyond!" - Buzz Lightyear
"You miss 100% of the shots you don't take" - Wayne Gretzky
"If you can dream it, you can do it" - Walt Disney
"It is our choices that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities" - J.K. Rowling
"You can't calm the storm, so stop trying. What you can do is calm yourself" - Tim Berners-Lee
"The only way to do great work is to love what you do" - Steve Jobs
"A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step" - Lao Tzu
"Life is what you make it" - Anonymous
"The best way to predict the future is to create it" - Abraham Lincoln

Story Hook Examples

If your main goal is to fully captivate and engage readers in an unforgettable story, then a well-crafted story hook is the way to go.

"It all started on a cold January night with a phone call that changed my life..."
"The moment I saw my best friend in that hospital bed, I knew everything would never be the same again..."
"I had been dreaming of this day for years - the day I'd finally get to explore the world outside of my small town..."
"The sun was just setting as we drove through the old neighborhood, remembering all the good times we had growing up..."
"I opened my front door to find a man standing in the hallway with a strange package - and that's how it all began..."
"The morning of my eighteenth birthday, I woke up feeling strangely different - like an adventure was about to begin..."
"I remember the day I decided to face my fears and take a leap of faith - that's when everything changed..."
"The night I saw the shooting stars were like nothing I had ever experienced before, and I knew it would stay with me forever..."
"It took one coincidence for me to realize that life was about to take me on a wild ride..."
"I had never felt so brave in my life when I decided to take a stand and fight for what I believed in..."

Hook Examples For Essay

If you desire to seize your reader's attention and keep them enthralled in your essay, a persuasive hook is essential.

Check out these hooks for essays examples:

"The world we live in today has changed drastically since the introduction of technology"
"Every generation has had its own unique set of challenges - and the current generation is no exception"
"We can learn a lot from history and the mistakes that have been made in the past"
"Society often puts a label on things without really understanding them or giving them a chance"
"The power of technology can be both a blessing and a curse"
"Education is the key to success - and it's important for everyone to have access to it"
"What would life be like without our modern-day conveniences?"
"We all have our own unique perspectives, but sometimes we forget to look at the bigger picture"
"Not everything is as it seems - sometimes we have to dig deeper to understand the truth"
"Life is a journey, not a destination - and every step of the way holds valuable lessons to be learned"

Narrative Hook Examples

Narrative hook examples are a great way to engage your reader in your story. Here are some examples of hooks for a narrative essay :

"It was a dark and stormy night, and I heard something outside my window..."
"I had been waiting for this moment my whole life, and finally it was here..."
"I had no idea what I was getting myself into when I opened that door..."
"The air around me suddenly changed, and a chill ran down my spine as I realized how alone I was..."
"It had been years since we'd seen each other, and now I was standing face to face with my old enemy..."
"I followed the faint light until I stumbled upon a mysterious room with an unknown secret inside..."
"It began as a normal day, but by nightfall, it was like nothing I'd ever experienced before..."
"The cold wind was howling as I made my way across the deserted desert, searching for something greater..."
"As I stepped through the ruins of the long-abandoned castle, I could feel an eerie presence watching me..."
"The clock struck midnight and suddenly everything changed - it felt like a new world had been born..."

Argumentative Essay Hook Examples

Argumentative hook examples can be a great tool to draw readers in and engage them with an argumentative essay .

Let's look at some hook examples for argumentative essay:

"The world we live in today is drastically different from what it used to be - and much of this change has been caused by technology"
"Every generation has its own set of challenges, and the current generation is no exception"
"We should always be willing to learn from history and the mistakes that have been made in the past"
"Society often judges things without really understanding them or giving them a chance"
"The power of technology can be both a blessing and a curse - we must find the balance"
"Education is essential to success, but not everyone has access to it"
"We all have our own unique perspectives, but we must consider the greater good"
"Sometimes things are not as they seem - it's important to look at all sides of an issue"
"Life is full of lessons - and it's impossible to learn them all in one lifetime"

College Essay Hook Examples

Crafting an effective hook for a college essay is essential to grab your reader's attention and draw them into the story.

College hook examples can serve as invaluable guides when creating this crucial element of any composition.

Check out some examples:

"The journey of life has taken me down many paths, but never in my wildest dreams did I imagine it would lead me here"
"My story is not a traditional one, but it's uniquely mine and I'm ready to make my mark"
"When I think back to the decisions that have shaped my life, this one stands out as the most important"
"I had no idea how much I could learn from taking a leap of faith and going outside my comfort zone"
"From the age of four, I knew that I wanted to be a doctor - and here I am on the brink of making it happen"
"I wasn't always the most successful student, but I never gave up and now I'm ready to prove what I can do"
"A person's future isn't predetermined - I'm determined to make mine a success"
"Education is power, and I'm ready to take hold of my own destiny"
"It's not about where you come from, but what you can achieve with hard work and dedication"
"Life is unpredictable, but I'm ready to face any challenge that comes my way"

Hook Examples For Speech

Speech hook examples provide a great way to hook your audience into your speech .

Here are some examples:

"We've all heard the phrase 'knowledge is power', but what does that really mean?"
"What would our lives be like if we weren't as connected to technology as we are today?"
"The world is a vast and mysterious place - let's explore how different cultures live and think"
"What can we learn from the mistakes of our ancestors? Let's find out!"
"We've heard about climate change, but what can we actually do to help?"
"We live in a world of opportunity - let's explore how we can make the most of it"
"Everyone has a story to tell - let's discover what makes us unique and wonderful"
"Hard work and dedication are key ingredients for success - let's learn how to make the most of them"
"Let's talk about what it means to make a difference in our world, and how we can do it!"
"We all have the potential to reach our goals - let's find out how!"

Hook Examples For Expository Essays

An expository essay provides a great way to engage your reader in your writing. Here are some examples:

"We often take for granted the little things in life - let's explore why they are so important."
"What lies beneath the surface of our world? Let's look deeper and find out!"
"Our environment is rapidly changing - let's see what we can do to protect it."
"What causes people to make bad decisions? Let's explore the psychology behind it."
"Without laws, society would be chaos - let's look at how laws keep us safe."
"What can we learn from history? Let's uncover the lessons of our past."
"Fear is an inevitable part of life - let's examine how to conquer it."
"Our minds are incredibly powerful - let's explore the potential of our thoughts."
"Life can be unpredictable, but how do we handle it? Let's discover some strategies."
"What is the meaning of success? Let's define it and work towards achieving it!"?

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Hook Examples For Compare And Contrast Essay

When writing a compare and contrast essay, it's important to have strong hooks.

Here are some examples of hooks that you can use for your compare-and-contrast essay :

"They say that 'opposites attract,' but do they really?"
"If you think two things can't be more different, think again."
"You might be surprised to learn that two seemingly similar things can have vast differences."
"Have you ever wondered what makes two things that seem identical actually very different?"
"There are many similarities between X and Y, but there are also key differences that make them stand out."
"Are you struggling to choose between two options that seem equally appealing?"
"At first glance, it may seem like two things have nothing in common."
"They say that variety is the spice of life, but is it always better?"
"It's easy to get lost in the details, but sometimes all we need is a little comparison to see things clearly."
"They say that everything is relative, but is that really true?"

Hook Examples For Research Papers

Crafting an effective research hook can be a powerful way to draw your readers into the world of your paper.

Examples can provide excellent guidance when crafting this important part of any academic work!

Let's look at some hook examples in writing that can help you with your research paper :

"Many people believe that X is the answer, but what does the research say?"
"We've all heard about Y, but how does it actually work?"
"What can we learn from the mistakes of the past and how can we use that knowledge to move forward?"
"How has technology changed the way we do research and what ethical considerations do we need to take into account?"
"What are some of the implications of Z and what can we do to address them?"
"The debate around A is growing - let's explore both sides and see where the research takes us"
"We all have our own opinions on B, but what does the evidence tell us?"
"Let's take a look at C and uncover what it really means"
"What can we learn from examining the history of D and how can that help us in the present?"
"There are many theories surrounding E - let's explore them and draw our own conclusions"

Hook Examples For Literary Analysis

Literary hook examples provide a great way to hook your readers into a literary analysis essay .

Let's look at some examples of a great hook sentence here!

"What secrets do the characters in this story hold and what truths can we uncover?"
"What does this piece of literature tell us about the human condition?"
"What themes can we uncover by examining this text through a feminist lens?"
"What is the author trying to say about society and how can we interpret it?"
"How does this story stand out from others in its genre and what makes it unique?"
"Let's explore the symbolism and imagery used in this piece of literature"
"What message is the author trying to convey and how can that help us better understand the world we live in?"
"The setting of this story plays an important role - let's examine it more closely"
"How does the use of language in this text help to convey its themes and ideas?"
"What can we learn about human nature by analyzing the characters in this story?"

Paragraph Hook Examples

Writing can be challenging, especially when it comes to crafting engaging openings. Here are ten hook ideas that might inspire your next paragraph:

"We all have our guilty pleasures, whether it's binge-watching reality TV or devouring junk food."
"Technology has transformed every aspect of our lives, from how we work and communicate to how we entertain ourselves."
"History is full of fascinating stories and characters. Let's shine a light on the forgotten voices of the past."
"Climate change is one of the most pressing issues of our time, but what can we do to address it?"
"Language is a powerful tool for communication, but it can also be a source of confusion and misunderstanding."
"The human brain is a mysterious and complex organ, capable of incredible feats of creativity and intelligence. Let's delve into the latest research on how our brains work."
"Art has the power to inspire, challenge, and transform us. But what is it about certain works of art that make them timeless and universal?"
"Identity is a complex and multifaceted concept, shaped by factors like race, gender, sexuality, and class."
"Philosophy has been a source of inquiry and debate for centuries, but how can it help us navigate the complexities of modern life?"
"Food is not just a source of sustenance, but a reflection of culture, history, and identity."

Query Letter Hook Examples

Query letter hook examples are a great way to engage your potential readers and agents.

"This story will make you question everything you thought you knew."
"Uncover an extraordinary tale of courage and determination."
"Discover the power of hope in this heartfelt journey of transformation."
"Follow a gripping story of passion and adventure."
"Journey with a character on a quest to find the truth."
"Experience an unforgettable tale of mystery and intrigue."
"Meet a remarkable cast of characters in this stirring journey of discovery."
"Go behind the scenes with a daring group of heroes."
"Explore a world of mystery and wonder with a captivating story."
"Be swept away in this thrilling adventure of courage and hope." ?

Hook Examples For Presentation

Presentation hooks are a remarkable way to captivate your audience and keep them engaged in your presentation. You can use interesting facts and statistic hooks as well!

With examples, you can create compelling stories or images that will make quite an impact!

"We all know that X is important, but why is it so crucial to our lives?"
"What can we learn from the successes and failures of Y?"
"Let's explore how technology has changed the way we do Z and how that affects our lives"
"What is the one thing we need to know about A in order to understand its significance?"
"We've all heard about B, but what does it really mean for us?"
"What are the implications of C and how can we use that knowledge to our advantage?"
"Let's take a look at the history and evolution of D"
"How does E affect our daily lives and what can we do about it?"
"What are some of the potential benefits of F and what risks do we need to consider?"
"What has been the impact of G on our society and how can we use it to make positive changes?"

Hook Examples For Introduction

Introduction hook examples provide a great way to make a strong statement.

"Welcome to the world of X - let's dive in and see what it has to offer"
"We all know Y, but why is it so important?"
"What can we learn from the successes and failures of Z?"
"Let's take a journey through the history of A and uncover its secrets"
"How has technology changed the way we do C and what ethical considerations do we need to take into account?"
"What are some of the implications of D and what can we do to address them?"
"The debate around E is growing - let's explore both sides and see where the research takes us"
"Let's examine the facts and uncover what F really means"
"What can we learn from exploring the history of G and how can that help us in the present?"

Concluding Hook Examples

Writing a strong conclusion can be just as challenging as crafting an engaging opening. Here are closing hook examples that might help inspire you.

"As we bring this discussion to a close, it's clear that [thesis statement]. But what are the implications of this insight for our lives and society as a whole?"
"In the end, the examples we've explored illustrate the complexity and nuance of [topic]. But what does this mean for us moving forward?"
"The evidence we've presented highlights the urgent need for [action or change]. So where do we go from here?"
"As we wrap up this conversation, let's remember that [key takeaway or lesson]. How can we apply this insight to our own lives?"
"The stories and characters we've examined offer a window into the human experience and our capacity for growth and transformation. What can we learn from their journeys?"
"As we conclude this discussion, let's reflect on what this means for us as individuals and as a society."
"The examples we've explored have shed light on the complexities and nuances of [topic]. But what are the broader implications of this understanding?"
"As we come to the end of this essay, it's clear that [thesis statement]. But how can we use this knowledge to make a positive difference in the world?"
"In conclusion, the evidence we've presented challenges us to rethink our assumptions about [topic]. Let's take this opportunity to broaden our perspectives and deepen our understanding."
"As we close out this conversation, let's remember the power of human connection to heal and transform."

Hook Examples For Personal Statement

Crafting an attention-grabbing hook for your personal statement can be a great way to increase engagement and draw readers in.

Utilizing examples of successful hooks is an excellent strategy to help you create one that stands out!

"How have my experience and values shaped who I am today?"
"What makes me unique from other applicants and how can that help me succeed?"
"How have my past experiences, both good and bad, helped me understand the importance of X?"
"What do I know about Y that makes me stand out from other applicants?"
"Let's explore how my skillset can help me achieve success in Z"
"What have I learned from the people around me and how has that shaped my goals?"
"In what ways can I use my knowledge of A to make a difference?"
"How will B help me grow as an individual and achieve my dreams?"
"What have I learned through C that has helped me become a better person?"
"What can I offer that makes me the ideal candidate for this role?"

Catchy Hook Examples

Captivating hook examples are an excellent way to grab your readers' attention and entice them into the content.

"Are you ready for X? It's time to find out!"
"Discover the shocking truth about Y"
"Let's uncover the hidden secrets of Z"
"Unlock the power of A - it will blow your mind"
"B will change your life - here's how to get started"
"What does C mean for us? Let's find out!"
"Are you ready to take on the challenge of D?"
"Can E really change your life? Let's find out"
"F can provide incredible opportunities - here's how to get started"
"Discover the hidden potential of G - it will amaze you!"

Hook Examples For Romeo and Juliet Essays

Romeo and Juliet is one of the most iconic love stories in literary history. But what is it about this tragic tale that continues to captivate audiences centuries after it was written?

Here are some hook ideas that might inspire your essay:

"What makes Romeo and Juliet one of the most enduring love stories of all time? Let's explore the themes and motifs that continue to captivate audiences today."
"From sword fights to sonnets, Romeo and Juliet has it all. But what is it about Shakespeare's language and imagery that makes the play so memorable?"
"Romeo and Juliet may seem like a straightforward story of love and tragedy, but what if there's more to it than meets the eye?"
"The feud between the Capulets and Montagues may seem like a typical Shakespearean conflict. But what does it reveal about the tensions and rivalries of Renaissance-era Italy?"
"What can Romeo and Juliet teach us about the power of passion and desire? Let's explore how the play challenges conventional morality and ethics."
"Romeo and Juliet has been adapted countless times in popular culture, but what can we learn from the original play? Let's examine how Shakespeare's work continues to influence modern storytelling."
"The tragic ending of Romeo and Juliet may seem predetermined, but what if the characters had made different choices? Let's explore the different paths the story could have taken."
"Romeo and Juliet is often seen as a story of youthful passion, but what about the older characters in the play? Let's analyze the roles of Friar Lawrence and the Nurse in shaping the course of events."
"Shakespeare's play may be set in Renaissance-era Italy, but its themes and motifs are universal. Let's examine how Romeo and Juliet speaks to contemporary issues and debates."
"The balcony scene in Romeo and Juliet is one of the most iconic moments in all of literature, but what is it about this scene that makes it so powerful? Let's explore the language, imagery, and symbolism at play."

Hook Examples For Social Media

Social media has become a ubiquitous part of modern life, with billions of users around the world. But what is it about social media that has captured our attention and kept us hooked?

Here are some social media hook examples for you:

"Social media is like a never-ending rabbit hole, with endless scrolling and new content to explore."
"With social media, we have the power to connect with people from all over the world, but at what cost to our privacy and mental health?"
"The rise of social media has transformed the way we communicate, but it has also created a new set of challenges for individuals and society as a whole."
"From Instagram influencers to TikTok trends, social media has given rise to a whole new world of digital fame and fortune."
"In the age of social media, we are more connected than ever before, but are we really communicating?"
"What happens when the platform becomes a battleground for toxic behavior and hate speech?"
"From Facebook to Twitter, social media has revolutionized the way we consume news and information."
"Social media has made it easier than ever to connect with people who share our interests and passions."
"With social media, we can curate the perfect image of ourselves and our lives. But is this curated image an accurate reflection of who we really are?"
"Social media has opened up new opportunities for businesses and entrepreneurs."

Tips for Writing A Good Hook

A hook is the first sentence or phrase in your writing that captures your reader's attention.

A good hook is essential for any successful piece of writing, whether it's a novel, an essay, or a blog post.

Here are some tips for writing a good hook that will engage your readers and keep them interested:

Start with an interesting fact or statistic: People love to learn new things. Starting with a surprising or little-known fact can be a great way to capture your reader's attention.
Ask a thought-provoking question: Asking a question that challenges your reader's assumptions or beliefs can be a powerful way to hook them to thinking.
Use descriptive language: Descriptive language can create a vivid picture in your reader's mind and draw them into your story or argument.
Create a sense of urgency: If your writing is about a timely or important topic, creating a sense of urgency in your hook can be an effective way to grab your reader's attention.
Start with a quote: A quote from a famous person or an expert in your field can lend credibility to your writing and pique your reader's interest.
Share a personal anecdote: Sharing a personal story or experience can make your writing feel more relatable and human, and can help to build a connection with your reader.

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Coming up with a good hook requires that you know your audience and the purpose of your writing.

Consider what interests readers in this particular topic or area.Use that to create an engaging opening sentence that will pique their curiosity.

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170+ Compelling Essay Hook Examples that Grab Readers’ Attention

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Regarding academic writing, the first sentence can make or break your essay or research paper. It’s crucial to write a hook that will grab your reader’s attention and make them want to continue to read your essay. A good hook is essential for writing a college essay, a personal statement, or an argumentative research paper. There are several types of hooks for essays, including question hooks, description hooks, and rhetorical questions, which can help you start your essay or research paper. Compelling styles of hooks can vary depending on the essay topic and the writing you’re working on, but the goal is always to make readers want to continue reading. In this article, we’ll provide compelling essay hook examples that grab readers’ attention and tips for creating a compelling hook for an essay or any piece of writing. Whether new to academic writing or looking to improve your skills, these examples and tips will help you write an attention-grabbing first sentence for your next essay or research paper.

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What is an essay hook?

An essay hook is the first line or a couple of sentences that grab your reader’s attention. It’s a way to start your essay with an attention-grabbing hook that makes the reader want to keep reading the rest of your essay. A great hook can be an anecdotal hook, a fact or statistic, a strong statement hook, or a narrative hook . Examples for essays might include “once upon a time” for a narrative hook or a surprising fact for a statistic hook. The hook sets the stage and draws the reader in, making it essential to write a great hook for your essay.

Different Types of Essay Hooks

Grabbing your reader’s attention from the get-go is essential when writing essays. That’s where essay hooks come into play. An essay hook is like a fishing lure – designed to reel in your readers and keep them hooked throughout your piece. There are various types of hooks you can use to achieve this, each with its unique appeal. Let’s dive into different types of essay hooks that will help you captivate your audience:

Statistic or Fact
Contradiction
Description
Startling Statement
Analogous Scenario
Historical Context

Get ready to captivate your audience from the first line with these ten diverse essay hooks, ranging from anecdotes and thought-provoking questions to surprising statistics and historical contexts.

Anecdote: Anecdotes are short, personal stories that can instantly grab the reader’s attention. Picture this: You’re starting an essay about the importance of perseverance, and you kick it off with a tale of how you overcame a challenging obstacle in your life. Sharing a relatable experience draws your readers in and makes them eager to hear more.
Question: Questions have a knack for sparking curiosity in your audience. Imagine beginning your essay on climate change with a thought-provoking question like, “Did you know that the polar ice caps are melting at an alarming rate?” This grabs attention and encourages readers to ponder the issue you’re addressing.
Statistic or Fact: Numbers don’t lie and can make for compelling hooks. For instance, if you’re writing about the impact of social media on mental health, you might start with a startling statistic like, “Did you know that teenagers who spend more than three hours a day on social media are 35% more likely to experience symptoms of depression?” This data-driven approach immediately emphasizes the significance of your topic.
Quotation: Drawing from the wisdom of others can lend credibility and resonance to your essay. Imagine opening an essay on leadership with a quote from a renowned figure like Mahatma Gandhi: “Be the change you wish to see in the world.” By incorporating a powerful quote, you set the tone for your piece and establish a connection with your reader.
Contradiction: Challenging common beliefs or assumptions can intrigue your audience. For instance, if you’re writing about the benefits of failure, you could start by stating, “Failure is often seen as a setback, but what if I told you it’s the key to success?” This contradictory statement prompts readers to reconsider their perspective and encourages them to delve deeper into your essay.
Description: Painting a vivid picture with words can instantly immerse your reader in your topic. Suppose you’re writing about a bustling cityscape; you might begin with a descriptive passage that transports your reader to the heart of the metropolis: “The city pulsated with life, its streets teeming with a kaleidoscope of colors and sounds, a symphony of chaos and beauty.”
Startling Statement: Shocking your audience can make them pay attention. For example, if you’re discussing the impact of deforestation, you could start by stating, “Every second, an area of rainforest the size of a football field is cleared.” This startling revelation grabs your reader’s attention and compels them to learn more about the issue.
Definition: Starting your essay with a clear and concise definition of a key term or concept can provide a solid foundation for your discussion. For instance, if you’re writing about cultural diversity, you might begin by defining diversity as “the inclusion of individuals from different backgrounds, cultures, and ethnicities within a community or organization.” This sets the stage for exploring the importance and implications of cultural diversity in society.
Analogous Scenario: Drawing parallels between your essay topic and a relatable scenario can help readers grasp its significance. Let’s say you’re writing about the importance of time management; you could start by comparing it to a juggling act: “Life often feels like a circus, with many tasks and responsibilities vying for our attention. Just as a skilled juggler must carefully balance each ball to maintain control, effective time management is essential for navigating the complexities of daily life.”
Historical Context: Providing historical context can lend depth and perspective to your essay. Suppose you’re discussing the evolution of technology. In that case, you might begin by recounting a key moment in history, such as the invention of the printing press: “In 1440, Johannes Gutenberg revolutionized communication with the invention of the printing press, paving the way for the spread of knowledge and ideas on an unprecedented scale. Today, as we stand on the brink of the digital age, we witness another seismic shift in how information is accessed and disseminated.”

Hook vs. lead-in transition to the thesis

Understanding the distinction between a hook and a lead-in transition to the thesis is crucial for crafting an effective essay introduction. A hook is the initial attention-grabber, drawing readers into your topic with an engaging opening. It can take various forms, such as an anecdote, question, statistic, or quotation, and its primary goal is to pique curiosity and encourage further reading. On the other hand, a lead-in transition smoothly connects the hook to the thesis statement, providing context and guiding the reader toward the essay’s main argument.

Hook as the Attention-Getter: Imagine you’re writing an essay about the impact of social media on interpersonal relationships. You might begin with an anecdote about a couple whose relationship was strained by excessive screen time, instantly capturing the reader’s interest with a relatable scenario. The anecdote serves as the hook, grabbing attention and prompting readers to delve deeper into the topic.

Lead-In Transition to the Thesis: After hooking your audience with the anecdote, it’s essential to smoothly transition into the thesis statement. This transition acts as a bridge between the hook and the main argument of the essay. You could follow up the anecdote with a sentence like:

“This anecdote highlights the pervasive influence of social media on modern relationships, a phenomenon that warrants closer examination.”

Clarifying the Thesis Statement: Following the lead-in transition, your thesis statement should briefly outline your essay’s main argument or purpose. In the context of the social media and relationships example, your thesis might assert that:

While social media offers unprecedented connectivity, it also poses significant challenges to genuine interpersonal connections. This statement provides a clear roadmap for the essay’s direction.

Essay hook examples

Argumentative essay hook examples.

Anecdote: As a child, I vividly recall the exhilaration of exploring the great outdoors, but now, amidst alarming reports of deforestation, I can’t help but wonder what future generations will inherit.
Question: What if I told you that the foods we consume daily could silently contribute to the decline of our planet’s biodiversity?
Statistic or Fact: Every minute, approximately 1 million plastic bottles are purchased globally, exacerbating our environmental crisis.
Contradiction: While some argue that technological advancements have improved our quality of life, mounting evidence suggests a darker reality beneath the surface.
Description: Picture a world where concrete jungles replace pristine landscapes, and the roar of machinery drowns out the symphony of nature.
Startling Statement: Contrary to popular belief, studies have shown that most of the world’s plastic waste isn’t recycled but pollutes our oceans and ecosystems.
Definition: Climate change isn’t merely a buzzword; it’s an existential threat that demands urgent action to mitigate its catastrophic consequences.
Analogous Scenario: Just as a small spark can ignite a raging wildfire, a single irresponsible decision has the potential to unleash irreversible environmental devastation.
Historical Context: Throughout history, humanity has faced myriad challenges, but none, perhaps as pressing as the urgent need to address climate change before it’s too late.
Rhetorical Question: Have you ever considered how our choices today will shape the world we leave behind for future generations?

Persuasive Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Growing up in a household where recycling was a daily ritual, I never imagined the dire consequences of our throwaway culture until I witnessed firsthand the devastating effects of plastic pollution on marine life during a beach cleanup.
Question: Have you ever wondered how a simple lifestyle change, like reducing meat consumption, could profoundly impact combating climate change and preserving our planet for future generations?
Statistic or Fact: With over 8 million tons of plastic entering our oceans every year, it’s no surprise that marine species are ingesting plastic particles at an alarming rate, threatening entire ecosystems.
Contradiction: Despite the convenience of single-use plastics, the stark reality is that these seemingly harmless items are wreaking havoc on our environment, leaching toxins into our soil and waterways.
Description: Picture a world where lush forests are replaced by barren landscapes, where once-glistening rivers run dry, and the only sound is the ominous hum of machinery signaling the demise of biodiversity.
Startling Statement: Prepare to be shocked: the fashion industry, often associated with glamour and luxury, is one of the leading contributors to global pollution and waste, with textile dyeing alone responsible for 20% of global water pollution.
Definition: Defining moment: climate change isn’t just about rising temperatures; it’s a complex web of interconnected environmental, social, and economic challenges that demand urgent attention and action.
Analogous Scenario: Just as a single domino can set off a chain reaction, our individual choices and actions, no matter how small, can shape the course of our planet’s future.
Historical Context: Throughout history, humanity has faced monumental challenges, but none perhaps as existential as the urgent need to confront climate change before it irreversibly alters the world as we know it.
Quotation: In the words of renowned environmentalist Rachel Carson, “The more we can focus our attention on the wonders and realities of the universe about us, the less taste we shall have for destruction.”

Narrative Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Amidst the bustling chaos of New York City, I found solace in feeding pigeons in Central Park. This small but significant ritual reminded me of slowing down and appreciating life’s quiet moments.
Question: What if I told you that a chance encounter with a stranger on a train platform could change the course of your life forever?
Statistic or Fact: With 85% of Americans experiencing workplace stress daily, it’s no wonder that burnout has become a pervasive issue in modern society.
Contradiction: In a world obsessed with productivity and efficiency, there’s a growing realization that true fulfillment often lies in embracing moments of stillness and introspection.
Description: As the first rays of dawn painted the sky in pink and gold hues, I embarked on a journey through the mist-shrouded hills of Tuscany, a landscape straight out of a Renaissance painting.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: despite advances in medical technology, loneliness has become a silent epidemic, with studies linking it to increased mortality rates and a host of physical and mental health issues.
Definition: 7. Embarking on a quest for self-discovery isn’t just about finding answers; it’s about embracing the uncertainties and challenges ahead, knowing that each step brings us closer to our true selves.
Analogous Scenario: 8. Life is like a tapestry, woven from threads of joy and sorrow, triumph and defeat, each experience adding depth and richness to the fabric of our existence.
Historical Context: 9. Transported back to the tumultuous era of the Roaring Twenties, I danced the Charleston amidst a sea of flappers and dapper gentlemen, a fleeting glimpse into a bygone era of glitz and glamour.
Quotation: 10. In the immortal words of Helen Keller, “Life is either a daring adventure or nothing at all,” a timeless reminder of the transformative power of embracing life’s challenges and opportunities.

Hook Statement Examples for An Essay About Yourself

Anecdote: Racing against the setting sun, I crossed the finish line of my first marathon, a moment of triumph that taught me the power of perseverance and resilience.
Question: What if I told you that a single decision, made in a moment of uncertainty, could alter your life?
Statistic or Fact: With over 7.9 billion people inhabiting our planet, each with a unique story to tell, it’s easy to feel like a mere speck in the vast tapestry of humanity.
Contradiction: In a world of constant connectivity, where social media promises to bring us closer, individuals have a growing sense of isolation and disconnect.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: despite the facade of perfection we often present to the world, each carries a hidden burden, a story untold, and struggles unseen.
Definition: Embarking on a journey of self-discovery isn’t just about finding answers; it’s about embracing the uncertainties and challenges that lie ahead, knowing that each step brings us closer to our true selves.
Analogous Scenario: Life is like a rollercoaster, full of ups and downs, twists and turns, each moment shaping our identity and molding our character.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the lessons of the past, I am reminded of the resilience of the human spirit, the courage to persevere in the face of adversity, and the power of hope to light our darkest hours.
Quotation: In the words of Maya Angelou, “I’ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel,” a timeless reminder of the importance of empathy and compassion in shaping our interactions with others.

Reflective Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Sitting alone on a park bench, I pondered life’s complexities, grappling with questions of purpose and meaning.
Question: What if I told you that the key to understanding oneself lies not in seeking answers but in embracing the journey of self-discovery?
Statistic or Fact: With mental health disorders affecting over 1 in 4 individuals worldwide, it’s clear that the quest for inner peace and emotional well-being is more pressing than ever.
Contradiction: Despite the constant pursuit of happiness in a materialistic world, an underlying sense of discontentment pervades our society.
Description: As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a golden glow across the tranquil waters, I couldn’t help but reflect on the ebbs and flows of life’s journey.
Startling Statement: It’s a harsh reality: the pursuit of perfection often leads to a spiral of self-doubt and insecurity, leaving us feeling more lost and disillusioned than ever before.
Definition: Embarking on a journey of self-reflection isn’t just about analyzing past experiences; it’s about gaining insight into our thoughts, emotions, and values and using that knowledge to chart a path forward.
Analogous Scenario: Life is like a mirror, reflecting our choices and paths, urging us to confront our reflections with honesty and courage.
Historical Context: Looking back on the pages of history, I’m reminded of the countless individuals who have embarked on their journeys of self-discovery, leaving behind a legacy of wisdom and insight for future generations to glean.
Quotation: In the words of Socrates, “The unexamined life is not worth living,” a timeless reminder of the importance of introspection and self-awareness in shaping our destinies.

Compare And Contrast Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Growing up with siblings, I quickly learned that while we shared the same genetic makeup, our personalities and interests couldn’t be more different, sparking endless debates and discussions.
Question: How can two seemingly identical phenomena, such as the rise of online shopping and the decline of brick-and-mortar stores, have vastly different impacts on consumer behavior and the economy?
Statistic or Fact: Despite being the same species, dogs and wolves exhibit striking differences in behavior and social structure, with domestication leading to significant genetic and behavioral changes over time.
Contradiction: In a world of constant technological innovation, there’s a growing divide between those who embrace digital advancements and those who cling to traditional methods, highlighting the tension between progress and preservation.
Description: As the sun set over the sprawling cityscape, I marveled at the stark contrast between the gleaming skyscrapers of downtown and the quiet suburbs in their shadow.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: despite living in an era of unprecedented connectivity, there’s a widening gap between the haves and the have-nots, with socioeconomic inequality reaching staggering heights.
Definition: Comparing and contrasting two subjects isn’t just about highlighting their differences; it’s about understanding their unique characteristics and how they relate.
Analogous Scenario: Just as two sides of the same coin offer contrasting perspectives, comparing and contrasting allows us to explore the multifaceted nature of complex issues and phenomena.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the pages of history, it’s clear that the rise and fall of civilizations often hinge on the interplay between contrasting ideologies and cultural values.
Quotation: In the words of Confucius, “The superior man understands what is right; the inferior man understands what will sell,” underscoring the importance of discerning between superficial appearances and deeper truths when comparing and contrasting subjects.

Psychology Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: When I walked into my first psychology class, I was fascinated by the intricate workings of the human mind, eager to unravel its mysteries and understand what makes us tick.
Question: Have you ever wondered why certain individuals are more resilient in adversity while others crumble under pressure?
Statistic or Fact: With mental health disorders affecting over 1 in 5 adults worldwide, it’s clear that understanding the complexities of the human psyche is more critical than ever.
Contradiction: Despite our advances in technology and connectivity, rates of loneliness and social isolation continue to rise, highlighting the paradox of our hyperconnected yet emotionally disconnected society.
Description: As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows across the tranquil landscape, I contemplated the enigmatic nature of memory and its role in shaping our identities.
Startling Statement: It’s a chilling reality: studies have shown that prolonged exposure to social media can negatively impact mental health, leading to increased feelings of anxiety, depression, and loneliness.
Definition: Exploring the intricacies of the human psyche isn’t just about understanding behavior; it’s about delving into the subconscious motivations and underlying mechanisms that drive our thoughts and actions.
Analogous Scenario: Just as a puzzle requires careful analysis and strategic thinking to solve, understanding human behavior requires piecing together disparate clues to uncover the underlying patterns and motivations.
Historical Context: Looking back on the annals of history, we can trace the evolution of psychological theories and practices from the early roots of Freudian psychoanalysis to the modern-day insights of cognitive neuroscience.
Quotation: In the words of Carl Jung, “Until you make the unconscious conscious, it will direct your life, and you will call it fate,” a profound reminder of the power of self-awareness and introspection in shaping our destinies.

Sociology Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Growing up in a tight-knit community, I witnessed firsthand the power of social norms in shaping behavior and fostering a sense of belonging.
Question: How do cultural expectations and societal norms influence individual identity and behavior?
Statistic or Fact: With urbanization on the rise, over 55% of the world’s population now resides in urban areas, leading to profound shifts in social dynamics and community structures.
Contradiction: Despite advances in gender equality, women continue to face systemic barriers in the workplace, highlighting the stark disparity between societal ideals and lived realities.
Description: As the sun set over the sprawling cityscape, I marveled at the juxtaposition of wealth and poverty, privilege and disadvantage, that defines the urban landscape.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: despite living in an age of unprecedented connectivity, rates of social isolation and loneliness are on the rise, with profound implications for mental health and well-being.
Definition: Exploring the intricacies of sociology isn’t just about analyzing society; it’s about unpacking the complex web of relationships, institutions, and ideologies that shape human interaction and behavior.
Analogous Scenario: Society is like a tapestry woven from threads of culture, history, and tradition, each strand contributing to the rich and diverse fabric of human civilization.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the pages of history, we can trace the evolution of social movements and revolutions that have shaped human history, from the French Revolution to the Civil Rights Movement.
Quotation: In the words of sociologist Emile Durkheim, “Man cannot become attached to higher aims and submit to a rule if he sees nothing above him to which he belongs,” underscoring the importance of social cohesion and collective identity in maintaining social order.

College Application Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Navigating the labyrinth of college applications, I grappled with the age-old question of identity and purpose, unsure of where I belonged in the vast landscape of academia.
Question: What if the key to unlocking your potential lies not in conforming to societal expectations but in embracing your unique passions and interests?
Statistic or Fact: With acceptance rates at top universities plummeting to record lows, it’s clear that the college admissions process has become increasingly competitive and cutthroat.
Contradiction: In a society that celebrates individuality and diversity, there’s a pervasive pressure to fit into a narrow mold of academic achievement and extracurricular success.
Description: As the deadline for college applications loomed, I grappled with the daunting task of distilling my identity and aspirations into a neatly packaged personal statement.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: the college admissions process, once hailed as a gateway to opportunity, has become a battleground of privilege and inequality, with students from affluent backgrounds enjoying disproportionate advantages.
Definition: Crafting a compelling college application essay isn’t just about showcasing your achievements; it’s about conveying your authenticity and passion in a way that resonates with admissions officers.
Analogous Scenario: Applying to college is like pursuing self-discovery, navigating treacherous terrain, and overcoming obstacles to uncover your true potential.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the evolution of higher education, we can trace the shifting priorities and values that have shaped the modern college admissions landscape, from the Ivy League’s elitism to the rise of holistic admissions criteria.
Quotation: In the words of education reformer Horace Mann, “Education then, beyond all other devices of human origin, is the great equalizer of the conditions of men,” a timeless reminder of the transformative power of higher education in shaping individual lives and societal progress.

Descriptive Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Lost in the maze of winding cobblestone streets, I stumbled upon a hidden courtyard adorned with vibrant blooms, a secret oasis tucked away amidst the bustling cityscape.
Question: Have you ever wondered what it would be like to wander through the halls of an ancient castle, tracing the footsteps of kings and queens from centuries past?
Statistic or Fact: With over 7.5 million species inhabiting our planet, each with its unique characteristics and habitats, the natural world is a tapestry of diversity and wonder.
Contradiction: In a world dominated by concrete jungles and urban sprawl, there’s an undeniable longing for the simplicity and serenity of nature’s untamed landscapes.
Description: As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow across the tranquil waters, I found myself mesmerized by the ethereal beauty of a sunset over the ocean.
Startling Statement: It’s a chilling reality: despite our technological advances and modern conveniences, many of the world’s most breathtaking natural wonders are disappearing at an alarming rate.
Definition: Exploring the world of descriptive writing isn’t just about painting a picture with words; it’s about evoking the senses and transporting readers to faraway places with vivid imagery and rich detail.
Analogous Scenario: Describing a scene is like capturing a moment in time with a brushstroke, each word adding depth and color to the canvas of the reader’s imagination.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the pages of history, we can trace the evolution of descriptive writing from ancient epics and oral traditions to the modern-day masterpieces of literary giants.
Quotation: In the words of John Muir, “In every walk with nature, one receives far more than he seeks,” a timeless reminder of the transformative power of immersing oneself in the beauty of the natural world.

Expository Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Growing up in a small coastal town, I was fascinated by the ebb and flow of the tides, sparking a lifelong curiosity about the forces that shape our natural world.
Question: Have you ever considered how technological advancements have transformed how we communicate and interact?
Statistic or Fact: With over 4.5 billion internet users worldwide, the digital revolution has revolutionized every aspect of modern life, from commerce and communication to education and entertainment.
Contradiction: In an age of information overload, there’s a growing disconnect between the abundance of data at our fingertips and our ability to discern truth from misinformation.
Description: As the first rays of dawn illuminated the rugged peaks of the Himalayas, I marveled at the breathtaking beauty of one of the world’s most majestic mountain ranges.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: despite our technological prowess and scientific advancements, humanity faces unprecedented challenges, from climate change and biodiversity loss to global pandemics and geopolitical unrest.
Definition: Exploring expository writing isn’t just about presenting facts; it’s about providing clarity and understanding on complex topics, breaking down concepts and ideas into digestible nuggets of information.
Analogous Scenario: Writing an expository essay is like embarking on a journey of discovery, uncovering hidden truths, and shedding light on topics that may be unfamiliar or misunderstood.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the annals of history, we can trace the evolution of expository writing from ancient philosophical treatises and scientific inquiries to the modern-day essays and articles that shape public discourse.
Quotation: In the words of Albert Einstein, “The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its reason for existing,” a timeless reminder of the value of inquiry and exploration in the pursuit of knowledge.

Definition Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: As a child, I struggled to comprehend the concept of empathy until a simple act of kindness from a stranger opened my eyes to its profound significance.
Question: What does success mean in today’s fast-paced, hypercompetitive society?
Statistic or Fact: Did you know that over 80% of marriages that end in divorce cite communication issues as one of the primary reasons for dissolution?
Contradiction: Despite the widespread celebration of diversity and inclusion, many workplaces still struggle to create truly equitable and inclusive environments for all employees.
Description: Picture a world where justice is not just a legal concept but a lived reality for every individual, where fairness and equality are the cornerstones of society.
Startling Statement: It’s a harsh reality: despite significant progress in the fight for gender equality, women still earn only 82 cents for every dollar their male counterparts earn, highlighting the persistent gender pay gap.
Definition: Exploring the concept of justice isn’t just about understanding its legal implications; it’s about grappling with the moral and ethical dimensions of fairness and equity in society.
Analogous Scenario: Defining justice is akin to navigating a maze, where different perspectives and interpretations lead to varied understandings of what constitutes a just society.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the history of justice, we can trace the evolution of legal systems and moral codes that have shaped our understanding of right and wrong throughout the ages.
Quotation: In the words of Martin Luther King Jr., “Injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere,” a powerful reminder of the interconnectedness of justice and its enduring relevance in our lives.

Process Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: In my quest to perfect the art of baking sourdough bread, I encountered numerous pitfalls and setbacks, but each failure brought me closer to mastering the elusive technique.
Question: Have you ever wondered how a simple recipe transforms raw ingredients into a mouthwatering masterpiece?
Statistic or Fact: Did you know that over 80% of people struggle to follow a recipe correctly, often resulting in culinary disasters?
Contradiction: Despite the abundance of cooking shows and online tutorials, many aspiring chefs still struggle to replicate restaurant-quality dishes in their kitchens.
Description: Picture yourself standing in a bustling kitchen, surrounded by the tantalizing aroma of spices and herbs, as you embark on a culinary journey to create the perfect homemade pasta from scratch.
Startling Statement: It’s a shocking reality: the average American spends more money on dining out each year than on groceries, yet many lack the basic cooking skills to prepare nutritious meals at home.
Definition: Delving into the world of process essays isn’t just about following step-by-step instructions; it’s about understanding the underlying principles and techniques that make a recipe or procedure successful.
Analogous Scenario: Writing a process essay is akin to guiding someone through a maze, providing clear directions and helpful tips to navigate each twist and turn.
Historical Context: Looking back on the evolution of cooking techniques and culinary traditions, we can trace the origins of many recipes and procedures to ancient civilizations and cultural exchanges throughout history.
Quotation: In the words of Julia Child, “Cooking is like love. It should be entered into with abandon or not at all,” a timeless reminder of the passion and dedication required to master the culinary arts.
Anecdote: Growing up in a community plagued by environmental pollution, I witnessed firsthand the devastating effects of industrial waste on public health and the environment.
Question: Have you ever stopped considering the long-term consequences of our society’s reliance on fossil fuels for energy production?
Statistic or Fact: Marine ecosystems face unprecedented pollution and degradation with over 8 million tons of plastic entering our oceans yearly.
Contradiction: Despite the overwhelming scientific consensus on climate change, there’s a pervasive skepticism and denial of its existence among certain population segments.
Description: Imagine a world where clean air and water are no longer a luxury but a basic human right; renewable energy sources power our cities and communities, and future generations inherit a planet teeming with life and opportunity.
Startling Statement: It’s a chilling reality: if we continue on our current trajectory, scientists predict that the global temperature could rise by as much as 4 degrees Celsius by the end of the century, unleashing catastrophic consequences for life on Earth.
Definition: Advocating for environmental conservation isn’t just about saving trees or protecting endangered species; it’s about safeguarding the delicate balance of ecosystems that sustains all life on Earth.
Analogous Scenario: Fighting for environmental justice is akin to fighting for our collective future, where every action we take today shapes the world we leave behind for future generations.
Historical Context: Looking back on the annals of history, we can trace the roots of the environmental movement to grassroots efforts and social movements that emerged in response to past environmental crises.
Quotation: In the words of environmentalist Rachel Carson, “The more we can focus our attention on the wonders and realities of the universe about us, the less taste we shall have for destruction,” a poignant reminder of the importance of preserving and protecting our natural world.

Cause and Effect Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Witnessing the devastating impact of deforestation on local ecosystems during a childhood trip to the rainforest ignited my passion for environmental conservation.
Question: Have you ever pondered the ripple effects of our society’s addiction to single-use plastics on marine life and ocean ecosystems?
Statistic or Fact: With over 1 million species facing extinction due to human activities, the planet is experiencing unprecedented biodiversity loss.
Contradiction: Despite the widespread recognition of the dangers of climate change, many governments prioritize economic growth over environmental preservation, perpetuating a cycle of ecological destruction.
Description: Picture a world where rising temperatures lead to more frequent and severe natural disasters, displacing millions of people from their homes and exacerbating social and economic inequalities.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: if current trends continue, scientists predict that the world’s coral reefs could be completely extinct within our lifetime, leading to the collapse of entire marine ecosystems.
Definition: Exploring the dynamics of cause and effect in environmental science isn’t just about identifying the root causes of environmental degradation; it’s about understanding how interconnected systems and feedback loops amplify the impacts of human activities on the natural world.
Analogous Scenario: 8. The relationship between human activity and environmental degradation resembles a chain reaction, where each action sets off a series of consequences reverberating throughout the ecosystem.
Historical Context: Looking back on the history of industrialization and technological advancement, we can trace the origins of many environmental challenges to the rapid expansion of human civilization and the exploitation of natural resources.
Quotation: In the words of conservationist Jane Goodall, “You cannot get through a single day without having an impact on the world around you. What you do makes a difference, and you have to decide what kind of difference you want to make,” highlighting the power of individual actions in shaping the future of our planet.

Critical Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Growing up in a household where literature was revered above all else, I learned to approach every text critically, questioning the underlying assumptions and biases embedded within.
Question: How can we reconcile the timeless beauty of classic literature with the problematic views and ideologies espoused by many of its revered authors?
Statistic or Fact: With over 70% of books written by white authors in the past decade, the publishing industry continues to grapple with issues of diversity and representation.
Contradiction: Despite the widespread celebration of freedom of speech and expression, mainstream literary discourse silences or ignores many marginalized voices.
Description: Picture a literary canon dominated by the works of dead white men, with little room for voices outside the traditional Western canon to be heard or valued.
Startling Statement: It’s a harsh reality: the literary world is rife with cultural appropriation, plagiarism, and censorship, raising questions about the integrity and ethics of the publishing industry.
Definition: Delving into critical analysis isn’t just about dissecting texts for hidden meanings or symbols; it’s about interrogating the power dynamics and social hierarchies that shape our understanding of literature.
Analogous Scenario: Critiquing a literary work is akin to excavating sedimentary rock layers uncovering fossils that reveal the text’s evolutionary history and cultural context.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the history of literary criticism, we can trace the evolution of different schools of thought and methodologies that have shaped how we interpret and analyze texts.
Quotation: In the words of literary theorist Edward Said, “Every text is a product of its historical and cultural context, shaped by the ideologies and power dynamics of its time,” underscoring the importance of situating literary works within their broader socio-political context.

Literary Analysis Essay Hook Examples

Anecdote: Immersed in the pages of a well-worn book, I was transported to a world of magic and mystery, where every turn of phrase held the promise of revelation and discovery.
Question: What timeless truths about the human condition can be gleaned from the pages of classic literature?
Statistic or Fact: Did you know that Shakespeare coined over 1,700 words and phrases still in use today, demonstrating the enduring influence of his literary legacy?
Contradiction: Despite the age-old adage that “actions speak louder than words,” literature can move hearts and minds with nothing but ink on a page.
Description: Picture a solitary figure hunched over a dimly lit desk, laboring over a manuscript late into the night, each word carefully chosen to evoke a specific emotion or response in the reader.
Startling Statement: It’s a sobering reality: despite living in an age of unprecedented access to information, literary literacy rates continue to decline, threatening to render timeless works of art obsolete relics of the past.
Definition: Delving into literary analysis isn’t just about decoding symbols or dissecting themes; it’s about uncovering the deeper layers of meaning and significance hidden within the text.
Analogous Scenario: Analyzing a work of literature is like unraveling a complex puzzle, where every clue and nuance contributes to the larger tapestry of the narrative.
Historical Context: Reflecting on the history of literature, we can trace the evolution of storytelling from ancient oral traditions and epic poems to modern-day novels and short stories that captivate readers worldwide.
Quotation: In the words of Virginia Woolf, “Fiction is like a spider’s web, attached ever so slightly perhaps, but still attached to life at all four corners,” a poignant reminder of the intimate connection between literature and the human experience.

Our Go-To Trick for Writing Catchy Hooks

Writing a catchy hook is like reeling in a reader; the first tug pulls them into your essay’s waters. Whether you’re crafting a research paper or a personal narrative, a strong hook sets the tone for the rest of your writing. But what’s the go-to trick for creating these attention-grabbing openings?

Know Your Audience: Understanding who you’re writing for is key to crafting a hook that resonates. Consider what will pique their interest and keep them reading. For instance, if you’re writing for a scholarly audience, an anecdote hook might not be as effective as starting with a relevant statistic or a thought-provoking question.
Start with a Bang: An effective hook is a sentence that immediately captures attention and sets the stage for your essay. The “once upon a time” moment signals to readers that something interesting or important is about to unfold. This could be a startling statement, a vivid description, or a compelling quotation from a famous person or a credible source.
Tailor Your Hook to Your Topic: Just like a one-size-fits-all approach rarely works in fashion, the same goes for hooks in writing. Your hook should be tailored to the subject matter of your essay. For example, if you’re discussing climate change, a statistic about rising global temperatures might be more effective than a personal anecdote about your summer vacation.
Ask a Provocative Question: A hook that gets readers thinking is like casting a line into a pool of curiosity. Starting with a question engages your audience and sets the stage for the exploration that will follow in your essay. Make sure the question is relevant to the essay topic and answers the question you’ve set out to explore.
Set the Scene with a Story: Humans are wired to respond to stories, so using a narrative hook can be incredibly effective in drawing readers in. Whether a brief anecdote or a vivid description, starting with a story hooks readers by appealing to their emotions and imagination. Ensure the story is relevant to the essay and sets the stage for the following discussion.
Draw on Credible Sources: An effective hook engages readers and establishes your writing credibility. Drawing on information from credible sources, whether it’s a reputable study or the words of an expert in the field, adds weight to your argument and signals to readers that your essay is well-researched and trustworthy.

Common Mistakes to Avoid

Avoiding common mistakes in writing hooks is crucial for crafting an engaging and effective opening for your essay. Whether you’re writing a research paper or a personal narrative, avoiding these pitfalls will help you hook your readers.

Don’t Start with a Thesis Statement: One of the most common mistakes is confusing a hook with a thesis statement. While a thesis statement outlines the main argument of your essay, a hook is meant to grab the reader’s attention and set the stage for what’s to come. Starting with your thesis can be dull and uninspiring for readers.
Avoid Using Clichés: Clichés are phrases or expressions overused to the point of losing their originality and impact. Starting your essay with a cliché hook, such as “Once upon a time” or “It was a dark and stormy night,” can make your writing stale and unoriginal. Instead, strive for freshness and creativity in your opening sentence.
Steer Clear of Vagueness: A vague or ambiguous hook can leave readers feeling confused or disinterested. Avoid opening sentences that lack clarity or specificity, as they fail to engage readers and set the tone for your essay. Instead, aim for precision and conciseness in your writing to capture readers’ attention.
Don’t Overdo It: While grabbing readers’ attention with your hook is important, overdoing it can have the opposite effect. Starting with an overly dramatic or sensationalized opening can come across as insincere or gimmicky. Instead, focus on crafting a hook that is genuine and relevant to the topic of your essay.
Avoid Irrelevant Hooks: Your hook should always be relevant to the content and purpose of your essay. Starting with a hook that has little or no connection to the rest of your essay can confuse readers and undermine the coherence of your writing. Ensure your hook sets the stage for the following discussion and aligns with your essay’s overall structure.

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What is an essay hook, and why is it important?

An essay hook is a compelling opening line or paragraph at the beginning of your essay that aims to grab the readers’ attention . It is important because it sets the tone for your essay and entices the reader to continue reading.

What are some strong essay hook examples?

Some strong essay hook examples include using quotes, asking thought-provoking questions, sharing surprising facts, or painting vivid pictures with descriptive language. For example, starting with “Once upon a time” is a classic hook that can draw readers in.

How can writing a personal essay hook enhance my essay?

Writing a personal essay hook allows you to connect with your readers personally. Sharing a personal anecdote or experience can create an emotional connection and make your essay more compelling.

Are there specific hook sentence examples for different essay topics?

Yes, there are hook sentence examples tailored for different essay topics. For instance, a persuasive essay might use a rhetorical question as a hook, while a narrative essay could start with a gripping personal story.

How can I structure my essay to incorporate a compelling hook at the beginning?

To structure your essay with a compelling hook, consider starting with a hook that relates to your essay’s main theme or argument. Integrate the hook seamlessly into the introduction to ensure a smooth flow of ideas.

Can a hook for different types of essays be equally effective?

Yes, a well-crafted hook for different types of essays can be equally effective as long as it resonates with the readers and sets the stage for the following content. However, the type of hook used may vary based on the essay’s purpose and audience.

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How to Write Great Essay Hooks (Tips + Examples)

Yona Schnitzer

Blank screen. Cursor blinks. Clock ticks. Brain freezes.

You stressfully wonder, “How will I ever finish this essay?”

I’ve been there.

Every time you write an essay, you want to catch your readers’ undivided attention from the very first word. The opening hook has to be *perfect* — no compromises.

But, instead of reeling under pressure to come up with this elusively perfect essay hook at the eleventh hour, I’ve found a better way to write great essay hooks.

In this guide, I’ll tell you what it takes to write the most compelling and attention-grabbing hooks. I’ll also break down six awesome types of essay hooks you can experiment with and share examples to inspire your next opening statement.

What is an Essay Hook?

An essay hook is the opening statement of an essay, written to capture readers' attention and nudge them to learn more about the topic. Also known as a lede or lead, this hook introduces readers to the topic/theme of the essay and piques their curiosity to continue reading.

The hook creates the entire narrative for your essay. It tells readers what to expect from the rest of the essay and creates context around your main argument or thesis statement.

6 Types of Essay Hooks You Can Experiment With

I’ve created this handy list of six different types of essay hooks. You can choose the one that best fits your essay’s context and create a stellar opening statement within minutes.

1. Compelling fact or statistic

Lead with evidence and use a powerful fact or statistic as your essay hook. It’s one of the best ways to capture readers’ attention from the start and keep them intrigued throughout your essay.

For example, if you’re writing about the importance of time management for freelancers, you have two options to create your opening sentence:

Generic : “Managing time as a freelancer is no easy feat.”

Impactful : “Nearly 70% of freelancers struggle to effectively divide and manage their time between multiple clients.”

This data point, linked to the original research, sets a strong tone for your essay and draws people in to read more. It communicates

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2. Bold claim hook

When working on an argumentative essay , I always write with the mindset that nobody has the time to read my thoughts from start to finish. So, I have to get to the point quickly and make a solid argument worth people’s time.

That's when opening with a bold claim works best. Condense all your views on the topic into a few thought-provoking lines that would make readers go, hmmm…

But remember, you can't open with a claim that people already know and accept as fact. It has to be something original and unique to make your readers tick, nudging them to dive deeper into your essay.

For example, if you’re writing about water crisis, you have two options to open your essay:

‍ "In some regions, there is not enough clean water for people to use."

‍ "Imagine a world where every drop of water is a battle, a precious commodity fought over by scores of people and animals alike. This can become a reality as early as 2050."

This bold claim presents a convincing argument about the global water crisis. It also emphasizes the urgency of this argument with a research-backed statistic.

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Open your Wordtune editor and write a few lines related to your topic. These sentences should have a consensus among your audience. Then, choose the 'Counterargument' option from the list of suggestions.

And you’ll have a bold claim for your essay with no effort at all!

3. Story/Anecdote hook

In all my years of writing, I’ve noticed how stories have a unique effect on people. A good story can resonate with a bigger audience, pique their curiosity, and deliver a more personal message.

That's why you can cite a personal anecdote or talk about a publicly known story as a good hook for your essay. This hook allows you to play with words and work in more storytelling .

One of my favorite writing tips applies here: enter the scene as late as possible and leave as early as possible. You have to keep it crisp instead of rambling on and on.

Consider these two examples:

Either of these hooks could work fine if we were just writing a personal essay about a move to a new place. But if we’re specifically writing about the sky, the second example is better. It sticks to the point — the sky and the color of the sky — and doesn’t stray into irrelevant details.

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4. Question Hook

Humans have a tendency to immediately look for answers every time they come across fascinating questions. Using questions as essay hooks can reel people into your essay and feed their curiosity.

But questions are also fairly overused in essays. You don't want to use a generic question that makes people say, " Not another question ."

Instead, think of questions that approach your topic from a fresh angle. This means honing in on what was especially interesting or surprising from your research—and maybe even brainstorming different questions to find the most fascinating one.

For example, if you’re writing about the psychology behind why we buy, you have two options to open your essay:

‍ “Do you know what factors compel us to buy certain things?”

Plugged in :

“Before buying anything, have you ever taken a moment to pause and think about possible reasons driving you to this purchase?”

The latter is more descriptive and creates a realistic scenario for readers to truly think about the topic of the essay.

5. Description hook

A descriptive hook works best when writing an explanatory or opinion-led essay. Descriptive hooks, as the name suggests, illustrate a topic in detail to create context for the essay. It's a good way to build awareness for and educate readers on lesser-known themes.

But a descriptive hook can easily become too plain or unexciting to read. To make it work, you have to write an engaging description using imagery, analogies, and other figures of speech.

Remember to make your hook reader-friendly by avoiding passive voice, mainstream cliches, and lengthy sentences.

Consider this example:

Describing a sunset is too cliche, so cross that one off the list. Describing the sky as it is on a normal day wouldn't be shocking or unexpected, so scratch that one, too.

This example creates something unique by using analogies to describe the color of the sky and painting a beautiful picture.

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You can also change the tone of voice to make the text more in tune with your theme.

6. Metaphor hook

One of my favorite essay hooks is to open with a persuasive metaphor to contextualize the topic. Metaphors can help you approach the topic from a completely different lens and wow your readers with interesting insight.

Metaphors are also super versatile to make your writing more impactful. You can write a one-line metaphor or create a scenario comparing one thing to another and linking it to your topic.

For example, if you’re writing about the experience of working at a startup, you can open your essay with these two options:

Short & sweet: "Joining a startup is like strapping into a rollercoaster: be ready to witness thrilling highs and sinking drops."

Long & descriptive : “Picture a small sailboat navigating the unpredictable winds and tides in a vast ocean. That’s a startup operating in a massive market. And with the right vision, this journey is filled with risks and rewards.”

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Writing good metaphors takes up a lot of creative brain power. You can always use Wordtune to find some extra inspiration if you're out of creative ideas.

Type your opening line in the Wordtune editor and click on the 'Give an analogy' option. You can ask for as many suggestions as you want till you find the best one!

What to Know About Your Essay (and Topic) Before You Write the Hook

Whether you’re writing a research paper on economics, an argumentative essay for your college composition class, or a personal essay sharing your thoughts on a topic, you need to nail down a few things before you settle on the first line for your essay.

‍ Let me break them down for you.

1. Gain in-depth knowledge of your topic

Before you start writing your essay, you need to know your topic — not just in name, but in-depth. You don't have to become a subject matter expert overnight. But you do need to research the topic inside out

Your research will help you:

Narrow your focus
Build an argument
Shape the narrative

Your research insights determine your essay’s structure and guide your choice of hook.

After organizing your research in a neat outline, think to yourself: ‍Did you uncover a shocking fact? A compelling anecdote? An interesting quote? Any of those things could be your hook.

⚡ ‍ Take action: After finishing your research, review your notes and think through your essay. Mark or make a list of anything compelling enough to be a good lead.

2. Type of essay

In academic settings, there are generally three kinds of essays:

Argumentative: Making the case for a certain stance or route of action.
Expository: Explaining the who, what, when, where, why, and how of some phenomenon.
Narrative: Telling a true story as a way to explore different ideas.

‍ The type of essay you’re writing is key to choosing the best hook for your piece.

A serious argumentative essay can start with a shocking statistic or a bold claim. And an expository essay can open with a descriptive hook while a metaphor hook would work best for a narrative essay.

⚡ ‍ Take action: Go through your list of potential hooks and cross out anything that doesn't fit the type of essay you're writing, whether it's persuasive , argumentative, or any other type.

3. Audience and tone

A best practice I often share with writers is to think of one reader and keep yourself in their shoes . This exercise can tell you so much about your audience — what kind of tone they like, what matters the most to them, what topics interest them, and so on.

You can use these insights to create a compelling essay hook. Here’s how:

For an argumentative essay, you’re trying to convince someone who doesn’t agree with you that what you’re claiming is right or, at least, reasonable. You don’t want to turn them off with snarky or offensive language — but you do want to be authoritative. Your hook should match that tone and support your effort.
A narrative essay is likely to welcome more lyrical language, so starting with a colorful description or an anecdote might make more sense than, say, a bold claim or surprising fact. Whatever tone you choose for your narrative essay — comical or gentle or bold — should be used for your hook.
‍ Expository essays can use all sorts of tones and be written to a variety of audiences, so think carefully about the tone that best fits your subject matter. An essay explaining how the human body shuts down when overdosed will likely require a different tone than one on the lives of circus masters in the late 1800s.

⚡ ‍ Take action: Look at your list. Can you write these potential hooks in a tone that suits your subject and audience?

4. Length of essay

Are you writing a 10-page paper or a three-page reflection? Or is this your senior thesis, pushing over 100 pages?

‍ If you’re writing a shorter paper, you’ll want to keep your hook quick and snappy.

Readers are expecting a quick read, and they don’t want to spend five minutes only going through the introduction.

In contrast, you can approach a longer essay — like a senior thesis or a term paper — with a longer hook. Just make sure your hook relates to and supports the core point of your essay. You don’t want to waste space describing a scene that ultimately has nothing to do with the rest of your piece.

⚡ ‍ Take action: If you write out the items on your list, how long will they be? A sentence or paragraph? Perfect. Two to five paragraphs? Unless your essay is on the longer side, you may want to save that information for later in the piece.

‍ Now that you know the basic facts about what you’re writing, let’s look at some approaches you could use to catch those readers — and reel them in.

3 Approaches to Avoid When Writing Hooks

I’ve read hundreds of essays — enough to recognize lazy writing from the first few words. It’s equally easy for readers to discard your essays as ‘poorly written’ just by reading the first line.

So, I made a list of three types of essay hooks you want to avoid at all costs because these hooks can only disappoint your readers.

1. Quotations

Quotes are probably the most overused type of hook in any form of writing. What's even worse is rinsing and repeating the same old quotes from Abraham Lincoln or Nelson Mandela in your essays.

No matter how powerful a quote sounds, you shouldn’t slap it at the opening of your essay. It doesn’t give readers the excitement of reading something original and looks lazy.

For example, if you’re writing an essay on productivity, here’s what a good and bad lede looks like:

“Amateurs sit and wait for inspiration, the rest of us just get up and go to work” – Stephen King

Did you know that consuming 100 gms of sugar can slash your productivity levels by over 50% in a day?

2. Definitions

The New Oxford American Dictionary defines a hook as "a thing designed to catch people's attention."

If I opened my article with this dictionary definition of a hook, you’d have either dozed off or left this page long back to find something more interesting.

Here's the thing: definitions put people to sleep. Readers don't want to see a formal, jargon-heavy definition of a topic as the very first line of an essay. Your opening statement should have some personality in it to show readers they're in for an exciting read.

For example, if you’re writing about happy hormones, here’s what a good and bad lede looks like:

Happy hormones are known to boost the happiness levels in your body by creating positive feelings.

Ever wondered why cat videos make you instantly happy, and ice creams give you an extra dose of energy? It's all about how happy hormones control our brain chemistry.

3. “Imagine this”

Opening your essay with "Imagine this" used to be an interesting way to put your readers in a scenario and set the context for your essay. But now, it's far too cliched and just another lazy attempt to write an essay hook.

You can create a relatable scenario for users without asking them to imagine or picture it. Use the descriptive hook format with an interesting choice of words to convey the same ideas more creatively.

For example, if you’re writing an essay on preparing for higher studies abroad, here’s what a good and bad lede looks like:

Imagine this: You’ve been applying to multiple universities, writing SOPs, and preparing for exams without guidance. Everything can go south any minute.

College application season is officially here. But with each passing day, you’re under more and more stress to apply to your chosen colleges and tick all the items off your list.

‍Our Go-To Trick for Writing Catchy Hooks

This opening statement can make or break your entire essay. While I’ve broken down my best tips to create the best essay hooks, here’s a surefire way to write compelling openings :

Go through your notes and either outline your essay or write the whole thing. This way, you’ll know the central thread (or throughline) that runs throughout your piece.

Once your essay or outline is complete, go back through and identify a particularly compelling fact, claim, or example that relates to that central thread.

‍Write up that fact, claim, or example as the hook for your essay using any of the methods we’ve covered. Then revise or write your essay so the hook leads smoothly into the rest of the piece and you don’t repeat that information elsewhere.

Does your hook spark curiosity in you?

Did that fact surprise you in the research stage?

Chances are, your readers will have the same reaction.

And that’s exactly what you want.

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The Essay Guide for Ambitious Students on How to Write an Essay Hook

Ingenious Tips for Essay Hooks That Catch and Hold Readers Attention

What Is an Essay Hook? How Does It Work?

How often do you use hooks for your papers? Do you know how to write a beneficial hook? First things first. An essay hook is an opening statement used to grab readers’ attention. If you wish a hook really works in your paper, you have to select the right one and remember that a good hook refers to the whole topic of your work, not just to some passages. Writing an excellent introduction to your essay makes your paper easier to read as an intro is like a seed. When you drop the right seed in your composition, you will get great results.

How to Find Beneficial Hooks?

Before using good hooks in your essay, you have to know what kind of paper you are going to write. It can be a definition, descriptive, or narrative essay and can be totally different from argumentative and critical ones. So, it means that grabbers for essays are nothing alike. Think of who is going to read your piece of writing. Each generation speaks its language, so if it will be read by children, use a simple style, or if your essay is intended for professionals, you can use a specific language to write an effective essay hook.

Why Do Facts Work as an Attention Grabber?

If you want to make someone read your paper to the end, get hooked him with a good attention grabber for an essay, such as a fact that they may not have known, and that will attract interest to the whole work. You can use a surprising fact which leaves no one indifferent. Let’s consider one of the following hook sentence examples:

Diet Cola will ruin your brain and give your brain cancer.

Admittedly, it’s a shocking fact, but such points usually work in most cases.

Try to avoid too complicated and too long expressions in facts. Otherwise, your essay will be dull from the very beginning.

A Catchy Fact Makes an Audience Read the Entire Essay

If you write a fact essay hook to drag attention to your paper, bear in mind that there are two types of facts: statistical and interesting. The statistical facts are used while writing an essay relating scientific subjects. Interesting facts could be some new information that you faced while investigating your topic, and you want to share it. Look at some examples of essay hooks:

Children aged 0-14 years account for only 12% of the population in Germany while in Kenya, this group accounts for 40%.

If you accidentally rip up 10 Australian dollars, don't get upset - you can use both halves as a five-dollar bill.

Win a Reader With a Joke

If you are eager to make your composition easy to read, catch, and hold a reader, anecdotes or jokes are considered as great hooks for this purpose. You can use a funny story, a story from your own experience, or a figment of your imagination. Your joke should be referred to as the main idea and shouldn’t be offensive. Of course, when a person starts reading your paper, he can ask, “Why did he write this joke? Why do I need it?” but nevertheless keep reading your work to find out why this joke refers to it. Your goal is achieved, your paper hook has worked, and your reader is captured, and he is going to learn your entire essay.

Do Opening Questions Hold Attention: True or False?

An opening question is one of the efficient grabbers for essays. For instance, asking a question such as “ How would you like to make a million dollars in ten minutes?” People would like to learn the answer to the question if your paper is started with a question. The simple trick of setting a question at the beginning will interest your readers. This desire is based on curiosity. So, if you wish to know how to write an opening question hook, rely on people’s feelings and possible emotions. As an option, use a rhetorical question. It’s an affirmation question that does not require an answer. A rhetorical question attracts the audience’s attention, makes them think about the problem, and pushes them to a particular conclusion. For example, People need food and water to live, don’t they? Using similar hook sentence examples is an exciting way of starting a composition on such topics as life values, existence, society problems, etc.

Let’s Write a Brilliant Research Paper Hook

You know that writing research papers can be overwhelming and exhausting. Even knowing that you need to find a suitable paper hook doesn’t make it easier because you have no idea for hooks at all. Here you can find some useful hooks for your research paper.

Famous quote. The usage of a quote from an influential man is an excellent way to support your idea. It will show that you have something in common with the mentioned person.

Setting the scene. It can be used as a good description hook. When you paint a picture with your own words, it draws the audience to read your paper to the end and find out how you have solved the current problem.

Use statistics. It’s a good idea to back up your statements with actual statistics and proven facts.

Set your thesis. It will express your side of the argument, and readers will be inclined to understand why you chose this position, and keep reading.

Persuasive Essay Hooks

Persuasive hook sentences are powerful statements that bring an affirmation about your paper. The technique of a strong statement is suitable here because it doesn’t matter if your readers agree or disagree with you. They just wonder how you are going to support your idea. A persuasive essay hook makes readers’ pay attention to the current issues and starts thinking of how to solve them. An excellent way to catch someone’s focus is to announce the problem or question that is related to the topic.

Good Hooks For Compare Essay

Having a task to write a compare essay, you need to provide good hooks for two points of view, as in this type of essay, the main task is to consider two existing points of view. A good idea for essay hooks can be using statements with pros and cons. For example:

Being a vegetarian has its distinct advantages and disadvantages.

Ways to Create a Paper Hook of the Mixed Type

If you don’t take an easy road, you can try to write an essay hook of the mixed type. It can be rather tricky, but it’s worth the risk. Experienced essay writers combine a narrative hook and an anecdote. As a result, they have a vivid, rich story that can’t help but attract the audience. Or you can start with a thesis statement and add a question to develop your further discussion in your essay. Let’s have a look at some hook mixed examples.

Children must be disciplined. How can we achieve it?

The digression will confuse your readers, so while writing, stick to the main idea of your composition.

A Literary Quote Helps to Express Your Deep Thoughts

An excellent attention grabber for essay is a literary quote. You can start your composition with something that has been written or said a long time ago by outstanding poets or writers. Quotes help you not only to express yourself but also to catch and hold a crowd of readers. We got used to trusting people who succeeded in life, and their words usually have some power. Have you got an idea of creating a good essay and would like to know how to write a good literary hook? Investigate your topic properly and think of writers who have ever dealt with this topic and choose the best one that will be able to characterize your position.

Famous People Quotes Provoke the Reader’s Interest

Quotes from famous people’s inspirational speeches can draw attention to your composition. Their motivational monologues have been divided into hundreds of quotes that are widely used. Let’s look at a hook using quote examples.

If you judge people, you have no time to love them. Mother Teresa

This quote could be appropriate to discuss people’s relationships or problems of the generation gap.

Effective Ways to Start Your Sentences in an Essay

Good hooks make the difference while writing an essay . Still, it often happens that a person, having enough eloquence, face obstacles in starting an essay. Sometimes you just need to start your first sentence, and then everything is going okay without any hook sentences. If you wonder how to begin your sentence effectively, you can use the following prompts. Don’t forget to use transition words (as well as, due to, for this reason), use words when citing (in fact, for instance, namely), use words to order events (eventually, in the meantime), summarizing words (all in all, in brief).

Good Hooks for Essays: 14 Hook Ideas with Examples

Now here’s the clue.

If you want to wow your teacher, polish the introduction. Add something interesting, funny, shocking, or intriguing. Good essay hooks help you build an emotional connection right from the start. Think of an essay hook as bait for your readers.

Our expert team has prepared numerous examples of hooks for essays. You’ll find hook examples for an argumentative essay, personal story, history essay, and other types of papers.

For 100% clarity, we provided examples using each hook tactic. And a short part about how to write a good hook.

Teacher: "I won't forgive you for this essay." Student: "But you gave me an A. What's wrong with it?" Teacher: "I couldn't stop reading it, and I burned my dinner."

💎 What Exactly Is a Hook & How to Write a Good One
📜 Examples of Classical Essay Hooks
💡 Try Some Informative Essay Hooks
🦄 Here are the Most Uncommon Essay Hooks

✅ Good Hooks for Essays: Bonus Tips

🔗 References for More Information

We highly recommend reading all the methods and examples, so you don’t have any questions.

💎 How to Write a Hook That Will Work for Your Essay?

The hook of your essay usually appears in the very first sentence.

The average length of an essay hook should be 3-7 sentences, depending on the topic.

But first, let’s quickly go through the key questions.

What Is an Essay Hook?

An essay hook (or narrative hook) is a literary technique that writers use to keep their readers engaged. It shows that the content below is worth reading.

The hook can have different lengths. Some writers make it last for several pages. Though, it better be a short paragraph or even a sentence.

Why Do You Need a Good Essay Hook?

Writing the right hook is essential for a few reasons:

It heats up your readers’ interest. If you did it right, they read the whole piece.
It shows off your skills . A right hook presents you as an expert in your field.
It attracts target audience. Only the readers you want will keep reading.
It keeps the tension on the right level. Use an intriguing question, and a reader dies to find out the answer.
It makes a good introduction. Starting your essay off a boring fact is simply not a good idea.

How to Write a Good Hook: Ideas and Examples

Hook ideas	Where to use	Hook sentence examples
		Elon Musk once said, “We are running the most dangerous experiment in history right now, which is to see how much carbon dioxide the atmosphere can handle before there is an environmental catastrophe.”
		Have you ever thought about how you can become happier?
		It had been all summer since we’d seen each other, and now I was standing face to face with my old enemy – my Math teacher, Mrs. Parker.
		According to the Annapolis Police Department, nearly 42% of teenagers have been bullied online, and almost one in four have had it happen more than once.
		Sunlight is clear and colorless until it reaches the earth’s atmosphere. Then, spread by air molecules, it paints the sky blue.

Next, we will discuss these hook types in more detail. We’ll also provide essay hook examples of less common yet intriguing types: dialogue, story, contradiction, comparison, definition, metaphor, puzzle, announcement, and background information hooks.

💬 The Famous Quote Hook

Use a famous quote as a hook for your essay on history, literature, or even social sciences. It will present you as an established writer. It shows how knowledgeable you are and motivates the readers to engage in the text.

⬇️ Check out examples below ⬇️

Quote Hook Example: Political Science

Hilary Clinton once said that "there cannot be true democracy unless women's voices are heard." Which creates a discussion about how perfect democracy should look like. If it is a form of government that considers all opinions, why are women silenced so often even nowadays? The truth is that we need to ensure completely equal opportunities for women in politics before we talk about establishing the correct version of democracy. And even the most developed and progressive countries are still struggling to get to that level of equality. It can be achieved by various methods, even though they might only work in certain countries.

Social Sciences

"Ask not what your country can do for you – ask what you can do for your country." These words of wisdom from John Kennedy reflect the perspective we need to teach the younger generations. For some reason, it has become popular to blame the government for any problem arising in society. Is it their fault that we don't think about waste and keep trashing our home? Social responsibility is a real thing. The well-being of our countries starts with the actions of every separate individual. It is not entirely right to wait until the government fixes all the issues for us. The best strategy is to start thinking about what we can do as a community to make our home even a better place.

And excellent sources of quotes for you:

Brainyquote.com – you can search quotes by topic or by author.
Goodreads.com is not only a great collection of e-books but also quotes.
Quoteland.com has plenty of brilliant words for all imaginable situations.
Quotationspage.com – more than 30,000 quotations for unique essay hooks.

❓Rhetorical Question Essay Hooks

It doesn’t have to be rhetorical – any type of question addressed to your audience will do its job. Such a universal kind of hook can spike the interest of your readers immediately.

Some useful patterns of rhetorical questions:

What could be more important than…?
What if there was only one… (chance/day/hour)?
Who wouldn’t like to… (be a cat/turn visitors into clients)?
Why bother about… (inequality/imperfect education system)?
Which is more important: … (making money or realizing potential)?

And more in examples:

Example of a Question Hook on Education

Wouldn't free access to education for everyone be wonderful? The answer would most likely be positive. However, it is not as simple as it seems. As much as the governments try to achieve this goal, there are still many uneducated people. On the bright side, in the era of technology, learning has never been so easy. Of course, some young adults just prefer the shortcut option of taking a student loan. Other ways are much more challenging and require a lot of responsibility and patience. Finding free educational resources online and gaining experience with the help of video tutorials might sound unprofessional. Still, you will be surprised how many experts hired in different fields only received this type of education.

Question Hook Example: Health

Is there anything that can help you lose weight fast? You have probably heard of this magical keto diet that is getting more and more popular worldwide. People claim that it helps them shred those excess pounds in unbelievably short terms. But how healthy is it, and does it suit anyone? The truth is that no diet is universal, and thanks to our differences, some weight-loss methods can even be harmful. Keto diet, for example, leads your body into the state of ketosis. What happens is that you don't receive carbohydrates, and in this state, fat is used as the primary source of energy instead them. However, it carries potential threats.

😂 Anecdotal Essay Hooks

This type would usually be more suitable for literary pieces or personal stories. So, don’t use it for formal topics, such as business and economics. Note that this hook type can be much longer than one sentence. It usually appears as the whole first paragraph itself.

It wouldn't be Kate if she didn't do something weird, so she took a stranger for her best friend this time. There is nothing wrong with it; mistakes like that happen all the time. However, during only five minutes that Kate spent with the stranger, she blabbed too much. Thinking that she sat down at the table that her friend took, Kate was so busy starting on her phone that she didn't notice that it wasn't her friend at all. Sure enough, the naive girl started talking about every little detail of her last night that she spent with her date. It was too much for the ears of an old lady. Kate realized she took the wrong table only when it was too late.

Literature (personal story)

Do not ever underestimate the power of raccoons! Those little furry animals that may look overly cute are too smart and evil. It only takes one box of pizza left outside your house by the delivery person for the disaster to begin. When they smell that delicious pizza, no doors can stop them. They will join the forces to find a hole in your house to squeeze into. Even if it's a window crack four feet above the ground, they know how to get to it. Using their fellow raccoons as the ladder, they get inside the house. They sneak into the kitchen and steal your pizza in front of your eyes and your scared-to-death dog. Not the best first day in the new home, is it?

📈 Fact or Statistic Hook

Looking deeper into your essay topic, you might find some numbers that are quite amusing or shocking. They can serve as perfect hooks for economics- and business-oriented writings. Also, it is better if they are less known.

Business/social sciences

The UAE workforce is culturally diverse since around 20% of employees (usually called expatriates) come from different countries. Ex-pats tend to take managerial positions, which makes communication within companies quite tricky. The training focused on raising cultural awareness is getting more common, but such educational strategies as games (or gamification) are still rarely applied in the UAE companies. Yet, gamification was a useful tool in other places, making it an attractive UAE team building method. It can significantly help integrate ex-pats and create a more culturally aware environment.

Statistic Hook Example in Economics

The United Arab Emirate's debt has been rising drastically in past years, from about US$17 billion in 2003, which is almost 19 percent of GDP, to US$184 billion in 2009. Only a small proportion of the debt can be tracked directly to the public sector. A report by UBS bank shows that most of the debt comes from the corporate sector. Most of the companies that hold the main section of the debt are financial institutions. The public sector partly owns them. Banks in the UAE have been accumulating their debt amounts in the years mentioned above and could now account for 75 percent of the total foreign debt. The discussion is about the reasons why the UAE debt has been rising at an alarming rate.

Some good sources for statistics

Finance.yahoo.com is perfect for business papers.
Usa.gov/statistics is an easy-to-use governmental engine for searching data and stats.
Unstats.un.org provides a massive collection of statistics published by UN organizations
Oecd-ilibrary.org is the online library of the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development (OECD), featuring its books, papers, and statistics and is a gateway to the OECD’s analysis and data.

🤯 Shocking Facts are Very Good Hooks for Essays

Very similar to a statistical hook, a fact can serve as a perfect engaging introduction. Search your field for some shocking phenomenon and gently insert it in the beginning.

Don’t forget to include a reliable source reinforcing your words!

Fact Hook Example in Economics

Nowadays, much attention is paid to the problem of shark finning around the world. Millions of sharks are killed annually for their fins, and many of them are dropped back to the ocean finless, where they die because of suffocation. In many countries, the idea of shark finning remains illegal and unethical, but the possibility of earning huge money cannot be ignored (Dell'Apa et al. 151). Regarding available technologies, market economies, trade relations, and cheap employment, it does not take much time to organize special trips for shark hunting. The Trade of shark fins is alive and well developed in countries like the United States and China. However, the number of people who are eager to try shark fin soup has considerably decreased during the last several years because of the popularity of anti-shark fin soup campaigns and laws supported worldwide (Mosbergen). The situation continues to change in China.

Daniel Stacey and Ross Kelly observed that long lines and a new gray market trend for bigger screen phones marked Apple's new iPhones debut. As expected, new phone models drew Apple fans outside retail stores (Stacey and Kelly). Global critics, however, noted that this year's lines were generally longer relative to previous periods mainly because of the developing gray market for Apple products. The new Apple's iPhones have larger screens than the previous models. Also, they boast of improved battery life, faster processors, and an enhanced camera. Tim Cook called them "mother of all upgrades" (Stacey and Kelly).

Sources to look for reliable facts:

Buzzfeed.com – news, videos, quizzes.
Cracked.com – a website full of funny stuff, like articles, videos, pictures, etc.
Webmd.com – an incredible collection of medical facts you will love.
Livescience.com – discoveries hitting on a broad range of fields.
National Geographic – needs no introduction.
Mental Floss answers life’s big questions, a compilation of fascinating facts and incredible stories.

🗣️ Dialogue as a Catchy Hook for Essays

Dialogue is another type of hooks that goes perfectly with pieces of literature and stories. It can even make your short essay stand out if you include it at the beginning. But don’t forget that it only concerns specific topics such as literature and history.

Here it is:

Dialogue Hook Example in Literature

– Why did you do it? – I don't know anymore… That's why I'm leaving for a little bit right now. I need time to think.

With these words, Anna stepped back into the train car and waved goodbye to Trevor. She couldn’t even find the right words to explain why she ran away on her wedding day. It wasn’t that she didn’t love Trevor, but there was this deep, natural, and unexplored feeling that told her it wasn’t time yet. But the only thing Anna realized was that the city made her sick. That day, she took off her wedding dress, bought a ticket on the next flight leaving that afternoon, and hopped on the train taking her to the airport. She couldn’t even remember the country’s name she was going to so blurry everything was from her tears.

Dialogue Hook for History Essay

– If we still had inquisition, we could probably set him on fire. – Some dark magic, indeed, my friend! It would have probably been a real dialogue if we knew who was the first automobile inventor for sure. People were undoubtedly shocked to see the cars moving by themselves without horses. However, since they started appearing around the globe around the same time, it is almost impossible to identify who was the original creator of the idea and the first automobile itself. The credit was usually given to Karl Benz from Germany, who created a gasoline car in 1885-1886. But there are also much earlier records of a gentleman named Nicolas-Joseph Cugnot, who built the first vehicle powered by steam in France in 1769.

🔮 A Story Looks Like an Extremely Good Essay Hook

A universal essay hook is a story. You can use this trick pretty much anywhere. The main challenge is to be as authentic as possible, try to tell something fresh and engaging. The more specific and narrow the story, the more chances for a successful introduction.

Story Hook Example for an Essay on Business

Dell started fast and strong. The original company was founded in 1984 when the founder was only a 19-year-old student at the University of Texas. Four years after the inception of the company, Michael Dell became the Entrepreneur of the Year. Eight years after he started the company from his dorm room's comfort, Dell was chosen as the Man of the Year by PC Magazine. […] The company was acknowledged as the world's leading direct marketer of personal computers. At the same time, Dell was known as one of the top five PC vendors on the planet (Hunger 9). […] However, the company's journey encountered a major hurdle down the road. Even after recovering from an economic recession in 2010, the company continued to experience declining sales.

🦚 Contradictory Statement – Queen of Good Hooks

Everybody loves to start an argument by contradicting some facts. Therefore, you simply need to add a controversial statement at the beginning of your essay. People of all ages and beliefs will not be able to stop reading it!

Challenging your readers works well for social sciences, business, and psychology topics.

Examples of contradictory statements essay hooks:

If you think being a manager is a calm and relatively easy task, try surviving on five cups of coffee, a sandwich, and two packs of cigarettes a day. You would rather believe that managers only walk around the office and give their staff orders, wouldn't you? Unfortunately, the reality is much harsher than such rainbowy dreams. The use of the internet in academic contexts is on the rise, and its role in learning is hotly debated. For many teachers who did not grow up with this technology, its effects seem alarming and potentially harmful. A whole set of personal qualities and professional skills must keep up with the successful strategic planning, assessment, and development. All the tasks the managers need to attend to are nerve-wracking and sometimes almost impossible to do. The stress from the demanding managerial position is often overlooked or underestimated.

Social sciences

Video games have been ruining our kids' lives and leading to an increase in crime. Since the gaming industry's development in recent years, the fear of its adverse effects on the younger generations' brains has become a significant concern. There is such a wide variety of games, ranging from educational to violent shooters and horrors. Almost immediately, caring parents jumped on the latter category, claiming that its impact is too significant and children become more aggressive and uncontrollable. Some supporters of this theory went even further. They decided to link real-life crimes to the effects of violent video games on child and adult behavior. However, as we will see later in this article, there is no or little scientific evidence supporting those ideas.

🔁 Vivid Comparison Essay Hook

Introducing your topic with an engaging, vivid comparison is a universal strategy. It is suitable for any kind of writing. The main idea is to grab your readers’ attention by showing them your unique perspective on the topic. Try to make the comparison amusing and exciting.

Comparison Essay Hook Options:

Comparison with daily chores (e.g., Proofreading your essays is like cleaning your teeth.)
Comparison with something everyone hates (e.g., Learning grammar is like going to the dentist.)
Comparison with something everyone loves (e.g., John was happy like a child eating a free vanilla ice cream.)
Comparison of modern and old-school phenomena (e.g., Modern email has much in common with pigeon post.)
Funny comparison (e.g., Justin Bieber is the Michael Jackson of his time)

Check out examples:

Environment

For many people, flying feels like a dream come true. More and more people take their first-ever flight thanks to the rapidly developing aviation technologies. Aircraft and airports are advancing, and air traveling is getting cheaper. However, except for transporting eager travel addicted and business people, planes are used in other ways. It appears that the whole economies across the world depend on the effectiveness and efficiency of airlines. Import and export demand this kind of transportation to work at all times. Aviation development seems like a great thing. However, just like any other technological breakthrough, it comes with a price. Environmental issues did not wait too long to show up.

Social sciences/psychology

Leaving home for the first time as a freshman can only be compared to the level of stress you had in childhood when your mother left you in the line at the checkout for too long. Indeed, becoming a student and moving out of the parent's house comes with a great deal of stress. All the unknown that lies ahead makes youngsters too anxious. Then, the difficulties of financial planning and increased academic pressure come as additional sources of worries. However, it does not have to be such a negative experience. Particular techniques can help students overcome their stress related to the separation from their parents.

📄 Definitions = Easy & Good Hooks for Essays

Another versatile essay hook option is introducing a qualitative definition. Try to make it capacious, and don’t fall into verbal jungles. This narrative hook is perfect for short scientific papers where there is only one focus subject.

Business Ethics

White-collar crime refers to the peaceful offense committed with the intention of gaining unlawful monetary benefits. There are several white-collar crimes that can be executed. They include extortion, insider trading, money laundering, racketeering, securities fraud, and tax evasion. Enron Company was an American based energy company. It was the largest supplier of natural gas in America in the early 1990s. The company had a stunning performance in the 1990s. Despite the excellent performance, stakeholders of the company were concerned about the complexity of the financial statements. The company's management used the complex nature of the financial statements and the accounting standards' weaknesses to manipulate the financial records. The white-collar crime was characterized by inflating the asset values, overstating the reported cash flow, and failure to disclose the financial records' liabilities. This paper carries out an analysis of the Enron scandal as an example of white-collar crime as discussed in the video, The Smartest Guys in the Room.

Motivation is the act of influencing someone to take any action to achieve a particular goal (Montana& Chanov, 2008). Employees' motivation depends on the job's nature, the company's organizational culture, and personal characteristics. In this case study, various theories influence and show how employees can be motivated in the workplace.

📚 Metaphor Hook for Essays

Naturally, using a metaphor as a hook for your essay comes with some limitations. You should only use this type in literature and sometimes in psychology. However, it serves as a great attention grabber if it’s engaging enough.

Let’s see how you can use a metaphor:

When life gives you dirt, don't try to squeeze the juice out of it. It's better to leave it alone and let it dry out a bit. Kate decided to follow this philosophy since nothing else seemed to work. After the painful divorce process, last week's ridiculous work assignments and managing two kids alone almost drove her crazy. No polite discussions, arguing, or bribing helped take care of seemingly a million tasks these little women had to deal with. Even letting out the anger just like her phycologist recommended did not help much. Instead, Kate referred to the last remedy. She put all the issues aside with the hope that it would get better later.

The recipe is relatively easy – take a cup of self-respect, two cups of unconditional love, half a cup of good health, a pinch of new positive experiences, and mix it all for a perfect state of happiness! We all wish it would be possible, right? However, the mystery of this state of being happy is still unsolved. The concept and its perception considerably change depending on time and values. Happiness is so complicated that there is even no universal definition of it. Besides, humans are social creatures, so associating your level of success with others is not unusual. Therefore, being happy means achieving a certain level of several aspects.

🧩 Puzzle? Yes! Amazing Hook for Your Essay

Doesn’t a good riddle grab your attention? Sometimes you just want to find out the answer. The other times, you want to figure out how it is related to the topic. Such a hook would be great for writings on psychology and even economics or business.

Here are the examples:

How many Google office employees you need to destroy a box of fresh donuts? Google is indeed famous for some of the most accommodating and unique working places around the whole world. However, the success of the company does not only appear from treats for employees. It seems that the organizational culture has many effects on business decisions and overall performance. All the staff working in Google share the same visions and values, helping them cooperate and lead the company to success. However, there is one aspect to consider. The organizational culture needs to be adapted to the ever-changing business environment.

Who survives on dirt-like substance, is never joyful, and only returns to the cave to sleep? It sounds horrible, but the correct answer is human. Nowadays, the demands for any kind of workers are rising, which brings tremendous effects on people. As the number of duties increases, it is getting harder for employees not to chug on coffee and come back home in time for a family dinner. The work-life balance is disturbed, leading to anxiety, relationship issues, and even health problems. Social life appears to be as important as making money. Therefore, the correct distribution of time between personal life and work duties is necessary for happiness.

📢 Announcement Is Also a Good Essay Hook Option

Announcements could be suitable for literary pieces and historical essays.

Such a hook doesn’t have to be too long. It should be significant enough to persuade your readers to stick to your writing. Make sure it aligns with your topic as well.

Ways to use announcements as essay hooks:

It was a revolution! The Beatle's first song came out in 1962, and almost immediately, hordes of fans pledged their loyalty to this new band. Nearly all youngsters became obsessed with their music. No one can deny that the Beatles are still considered the creators of some of the best songs in history. However, the arrival of the British band influences culture as well. Many photos depict girls going crazy on live concerts and guys shaping their haircuts after the Beatles' members. The revolution that the band brought left an impact, evidence that we can still trace in modern British culture and music.

I will never go to Starbucks again! Oh, no, mind me. I love their coffee. At some point in my life, I even thought I had an addiction and had to ask my friends to watch my consumption of Pumpkin Spice Latte. Then, the wind of change turned everything upside down. On my usual Starbucks morning run, I noticed a homeless man holding a paper cup begging for money. At first, I didn't pay much attention since it's a usual occurrence in our area. However, one day, I recognized my old neighbor in him. The only cash I had on me, I usually spent on my cup of coffee, but I decided it was not much of a sacrifice. From that moment, I only showed up on that street to shove a few bucks into that poor guy's cup. One day, to my surprise, he talked to me.

ℹ️ Background Information Essay Hook

Last but not least, give background information on your subject to make a good intro. Such an essay hook is effortless and suitable for practically any paper. Try to find the most unobvious angle to the background information. At the same time, keep it short and substantive.

Here are the ways to use background information essay hooks:

Air Arabia is among the leading low-cost carriers in the global airline industry. The airline is mainly based at the Sharjah International Airport in the United Arab Emirates (UAE) (Air Arabia, 2012). The airline came into inception in 2003 after His Highness Dr. Sheik Mohammed Al Qassimi, the Ruler of Sharjah, issued an Emiri Decree. Later, Air Arabia was transformed into a limited liability company. For nearly a decade, Air Arabia has witnessed tremendous growth, resulting in increased fleet size and improved sales revenues. At the same time, Air Arabia has created a renowned brand that offers reliable and safe services (Dubai Media Incorporated, 2012). Air Arabia identifies itself as a low-cost carrier by providing low fares in the industry. Some of the key strengths of the airline include punctuality and safety. This aims to ensure that the airline serves its customers most efficiently by observing its safety requirements and adhering to the landing and takeoff schedules (De Kluyver, 2010).

Walmart was founded by Sam Walton in the Arkansas United States in 1962 as a grocery store. The company, which operates a chain of over 8,000 stores in fifteen countries, is estimated to employ over two million employees from diverse backgrounds. Wal-Mart was incorporated in 1969 and started trading in the New York Stock Exchange in 1972. […] Although the company can leave its consumers with a saving due to its low-price policy, it has faced some sharp criticisms over how it treats its employees and other stakeholders. Wal-Mart boasts of its ability to save its customers' money, an average of $950 per year. This, however, has been criticized as harming the community. Also, the feminists' activists have focused on Walmart's misconduct in offering low prices. (Fraedrich, Ferrell & Ferrell 440)

Now we won’t keep you for long. Let’s just go through simple points of essay hook writing.

Someone may think that you have to write your hook first. It comes first in the paper, right?

In reality, though, you can wait until your entire essay is nearly finished. Then go back and rewrite the very first paragraph. This way, you can have a fresh look at what you’ve written in the beginning.

Here’s a simple plan you can follow.

First, write a basic version of your thesis statement.
Then, provide supporting evidence for your thesis in every body paragraph.
After that, reword your thesis statement and write your concluding paragraph.
Finally, search for an attention-grabbing fact, statistic, or anything from the list above to serve as an engaging essay hook.

Add this essay hook to the beginning of your introduction. Make sure that your ideas still flow naturally into your thesis statement.

⚠️ Pro tip: choose various hooks and play around, adding each hook to your introduction paragraph. Like this, you can determine which one makes the most impressive beginning to your paper.

Some of your choices may sound interesting but may not lead to your essay’s main point. Don’t panic! Paper writing always involves trial and error. Just keep trying your essay hook ideas until one fits perfectly.

That’s it 😊

Good luck with your work!

🔗 References

Hook – Examples and Definition of Hook
How to Engage the Reader in the Opening Paragraph – BBC
Hooks and Attention Grabbers; George Brown College Writing Centre
Hook Examples and Definition; Literary Devices
What Is a Narrative Hook? Video
How to: Writing Hooks or Attention-Getting Openings-YouTube

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Hook Generator

AI Hook Generator: Write a Perfect Attention-Grabber

What is a hook generator.

In writing, a hook is a sentence or group of sentences that serves as an attention-grabbing opening to a piece of writing. It is a powerful tool to engage readers or listeners and encourage them to continue reading or listening. However, crafting a good hook can be challenging, and that's where a hook generator comes in.

A hook generator, also known as a hook creator or hook sentence generator, is an online tool that provides users with various ideas for hooks that they can use in their writing. These tools help writers save time and effort by providing them with different options for a hook that they can choose from.

Why Should You Use a Hook Statement Generator?

Using a hook generator has several advantages for writers, including:

Time-saving: Writing a hook can be a time-consuming process. A hook generator can save writers time by providing them with various options to choose from.
Increased creativity: A hook generator can stimulate creativity by providing writers with unique and interesting ideas that they might not have thought of on their own.
Improved engagement: A well-crafted hook can improve reader engagement, and a hook generator can help writers create attention-grabbing hooks that keep their readers interested.
Consistency: A hook generator can help writers ensure that the tone and style of their hooks are consistent throughout their writing. This can help create a more cohesive and polished piece of writing, which can improve the reader's overall experience.
Flexibility: A hook generator can provide writers with different types of hooks that can be tailored to their specific writing needs. For example, a writer may need a hook for an essay, a speech, or a marketing campaign. A hook generator can provide a variety of hook types, such as anecdotes, questions, or quotations, that can be customized to suit the specific type of writing.

How to Use Our Hook Generator?

Our hook generator is easy to use and can help writers generate hooks quickly and efficiently. Here's how to use it:

Step 1: Describe the Topic

Enter the topic you want to write about in the text box. This will help the generator provide relevant and specific ideas for hooks.

Step 2: Generate Hook Ideas

Click on the "Generate Hooks" button, and our hook generator will provide you with different ideas for hooks. You can select the ones that you like and save them for later use.

Step 3: Save Hooks with Potential

After generating hook ideas, you can save the ones that you think have the potential to engage your audience. You can copy and paste them into a separate document for future reference.

Step 4: Refine Your Hooks

You can refine the hooks you've saved by making changes to them or combining different ideas to create a more unique hook.

Tips for writing effective hooks

Here are some tips for writing effective hooks:

Know your audience

Before writing a hook, it's essential to know your target audience. Consider what type of reader or listener you are trying to attract and what their interests and values are. This will help you create a hook that is relevant and appealing to your audience.

Hook examples:

Are you tired of feeling overwhelmed by your to-do list?
Are you passionate about saving the environment?
Do you love trying new recipes and experimenting in the kitchen?

Start with an interesting fact or statistic

Sharing a surprising or little-known fact can pique readers' curiosity and make them want to learn more. Starting with a fact or statistic can also establish the importance of the topic you're writing about.

Pose a thought-provoking question

Asking a question can make readers or listeners think and engage with the topic on a deeper level. Make sure the question is relevant to your topic and encourages readers to keep reading or listening.

Thought-provoking hook exa

What would you do if you had only 24 hours left to live?
Is it ever acceptable to lie to protect someone's feelings?
Should students be allowed to grade their teachers?

Use a quotation

Using a quotation from a famous person or a book related to your topic can add credibility and interest to your writing. Make sure the quotation is relevant and memorable.

Quotation hook examples:

"The only way to do great work is to love what you do." - Steve Jobs
"The best way to predict your future is to create it." - Abraham Lincoln
"It is not the strongest of the species that survives, nor the most intelligent, but the one most responsive to change." - Charles Darwin

Tell a story or anecdote

Sharing a personal story or anecdote can help readers connect with your writing on an emotional level. Make sure the story is relevant to your topic and highlights the importance of the issue you're discussing.

Story hook examples:

When I was six years old, I fell off my bike and broke my arm. Little did I know that this event would shape my entire life.
My grandfather used to tell me stories about his experiences during the war. His stories always reminded me of the sacrifices he made for our country.
I remember the first time I tasted sushi. It was love at first bite, and I've been a fan ever since.

Humour can be an effective way to engage readers and make them remember your writing. However, make sure the humor is appropriate and relevant to your topic.

Why did the tomato turn red? Because it saw the salad dressing!
I used to play piano by ear, but now I use my hands instead.
I told my wife she was drawing her eyebrows too high. She looked surprised.

Keep it concise

A hook should be brief and to the point. Avoid using long, complicated sentences that may confuse or bore readers.

Concise hooks examples:

Time is money.
Life is short.
Knowledge is power.

Make it unique

A hook should be unique and stand out from other hooks. Avoid using cliches or overused phrases that readers may have seen before.

Your hook should accurately reflect the content of your writing. Avoid using clickbait or misleading hooks that may disappoint or frustrate readers.

How to Write a Good Hook for an Essay

A good hook for an essay should be attention-grabbing and relevant to the topic. It should also be unique and creative. Here are some types of hooks in writing that you can use for your essay:

Anecdote: Start with a short and interesting story related to your topic.
Question: Pose a question to your audience that makes them think and want to learn more.
Quotation: Use a quotation from a famous person or a book related to your topic.
Surprising fact: Share a surprising or shocking fact that will make your readers curious.
Definition: Start with a clear and concise definition of a term related to your topic.

Choose Your Type of Hook

After selecting the type of hook you want to use, you can start writing your hook sentence. A good hook should be concise and to the point, but it should also grab your readers' attention.

How to Start a Hook for an Essay

To start a hook for an essay, you need to think about what will capture your readers' attention. You can start by asking a question, sharing a story, or providing an interesting fact. The goal is to create a hook that will make your readers want to keep reading.

Essay Hook Examples

Here are some examples of good hooks for essays:

Anecdote: "When I was six years old, I broke my leg in a car accident. Little did I know that this event would shape my entire life."
Question: "Did you know that the human brain can process information faster than the speed of light?"
Quotation: "As Nelson Mandela once said, 'Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.'"
Surprising fact: "Did you know that the world's largest living organism is a fungus that covers over 2,200 acres in Oregon?"
Definition: "According to the Merriam-Webster dictionary, 'procrastination' is defined as the act of delaying or postponing something."

Hook Generators

Aside from our hook generator, there are several other hook generators available online that can help writers create attention-grabbing hooks for their writing. Here are some examples:

Instagram Hooks Generator

Instagram is a popular social media platform that is used by millions of people around the world. If you're looking to create reels on Instagram, you can use an Instagram hooks generator to come up with creative and engaging hook ideas.

An Instagram hooks generator is a tool that generates creative ideas and concepts for reels on the Instagram platform. It is designed to help users create attention-grabbing and visually stunning content to capture the attention of their audience.

Instagram hook tips:

Use a visually stunning image or video that captures the essence of your brand or product
Use an interesting caption that encourages viewers to engage with your post
Use a unique hashtag that makes your post easily discoverable

Check out our AI instagram bio generator

Email Hooks Generator

Email marketing is an effective way to reach potential customers and promote your business. To make sure your emails get noticed, you can use an email hooks generator to come up with attention-grabbing subject lines that entice your subscribers to open your emails.

An email hooks generator is a tool that generates attention-grabbing subject lines for email marketing campaigns. It is designed to help users create subject lines that entice their subscribers to open their emails. Here are some benefits and examples of an email hooks generator:

Email hook tips:

Ask a question in the subject line that piques the subscriber's curiosity
Use numbers to make the subject line more specific and compelling
Use a sense of urgency to create a feeling of FOMO (fear of missing out)

Check out our cover letter generator and how to write letter of recommendation with AI .

Speech Hook Generator

Public speaking can be daunting, but a well-crafted hook can help you capture your audience's attention and keep them engaged throughout your speech. A speech hook generator can provide you with different ideas for hooks that you can use to make your speech more memorable.

A speech hook generator is a tool that generates creative and engaging ideas for speeches. It is designed to help users create attention-grabbing hooks that capture the audience's attention and keep them engaged throughout the speech.

Speech hook tips:

Use a personal story or anecdote that relates to the topic of the speech
Use a shocking statistic or fact that highlights the importance of the issue being discussed
Use humor to make the audience laugh and create a relaxed atmosphere

Essay Hook Generator

An essay hook generator can help you come up with creative ideas for hooks that you can use to make your essay stand out. By using a hook generator, you can save time and effort while creating a hook that will make your essay more engaging.

An essay hook generator is a tool that generates creative ideas for hooks for essays. It is designed to help users create attention-grabbing hooks that make their essays stand out.

Essay hook tips:

Use a quote from a famous person or a book related to the topic of the essay
Use a surprising or little-known fact that highlights the importance of the issue being discussed
Use a personal story or anecdote that relates to the topic of the essay

Song Hook Generator

Writing a catchy hook is essential for creating a successful song. A song hook generator can provide you with different ideas for hooks that you can use in your songwriting.

A song hook generator is a tool that generates creative and memorable ideas for hooks for songs. It is designed to help users create catchy and memorable hooks that stick in the listener's mind.

Song hook tips:

Use a catchy melody or rhythm that makes the hook memorable
Use a simple and repetitive phrase that is easy for listeners to remember
Use a metaphor or analogy that makes the hook more interesting and memorable

Check out also our country song generator and song title generator .

Marketing Hook Generator

Marketing hooks are used to grab the attention of potential customers and persuade them to buy your products or services. A marketing hook generator can provide you with different ideas for hooks that you can use in your marketing campaigns to make them more effective.

In conclusion, using a hook generator can be a valuable tool for writers who want to create attention-grabbing hooks quickly and efficiently. By following the steps outlined in this article and using a hook generator, you can create hooks that engage your audience and make your writing more memorable.

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9 Secrets to Telling an Attention-Grabbing Story

You’ve completed most of your application. Now it’s time to write your personal statement. You want your statement to stand out from the rest, and the way to do this is to tell a compelling story – the tale of your greatest achievements, dreams, and challenges.

You can tell a compelling story by tying together the following key elements:

Storytelling element #1: Create a killer opening

Start with something that will grab the reader’s attention from the get-go. This will ensure that they keep reading enthusiastically. Usually this is something in a scene or moment in the middle of the action. Starting an essay by saying “One day I decided to watch TV” will probably leave your reader not really caring what happened next, even if that leads to the most important part of the essay. However, starting your essay with “The moment I found the lump, I suspected that my life was about to change forever” will surely draw your reader in.

Storytelling element #2: Set context

‘“It was mid-July 2011. I was a busy consultant at McKinsey’s Chicago office, the proud father of a boy about to turn one, and a generally happy guy in his mid-20s.”

Context (person, place, time) is important because readers want to understand the story’s circumstances; it helps them relate to the story, even if they’ve never been in that situation.

Storytelling element #3: Introduce the stakes

The above also shows the reader what’s at stake. Stakes further help the reader relate to a story – if there’s little for the main character to lose, then the reader won’t care much about what happens next. If you never figured out the source of the lump and treated it (if necessary), then you wouldn’t have been able to continue your life as a busy consultant, proud father, and generally happy guy. You don’t need huge stakes for people to relate to your story; but effective stakes are something most of us would fight for, like health, a job, our community’s welfare, and the like.

Storytelling elements #4 and #5: Outline the obstacles AND Demonstrate strength of character

“It was tempting to wish the lump would just go away, and for a few days that was my strategy. I didn’t even tell my wife. But soon I recognized that knowledge is power, and made an appointment with my doctor. Within a week I had a diagnosis: cancer.”

This keeps the reader interested because it brings in two new elements: an obstacle (cancer) and character (your personality traits).

By this point in the story, your readers will know that you are the main character – you’re the consultant, father, etc. But the text above shows your reader what kind of character you are : one who is human (tempted to wish something bad away) but also one who takes action in adverse circumstances (going to the doctor).

Character isn’t only about positive traits. Many essay questions ask you to discuss a time you failed or made a mistake . For those, you need to highlight negative traits upfront (e.g., keeping the lump a secret), but in the context of how you gained insights and ultimately more positive attributes from dealing with their consequences.

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Storytelling element #6: Add a twist

So, what happens next in our tale? (Incidentally, a well-told story uses these elements to make readers ask this question again and again, pulling them through the story.)

“Once I got past the initial shock, I discovered an unexpected challenge: choosing among major surgery, two rounds of chemotherapy, and ‘surveillance’ (i.e. regular testing to see if the cancer was spreading). The options had the exact same survival rate (very high), but very different side-effect profiles. For example, the surgery was associated with potential nerve damage, while the chemo could have resulted in lower lung capacity.”

This part of our story includes a twist and further obstacles. Twists, or surprise turns in stories – in this case, the challenge of choosing treatment – aren’t essential to grad school essays, but they certainly make them more engaging: a teammate with a secret, a client’s abrupt shift in expectations, etc. In this story, the twist also represented an obstacle, in that our courageous subject had to choose from three very different treatments with similar levels of effectiveness.

Three Ways Writing About Obstacles Strengthens Your Application Essays

Storytelling element #7: Detail the process

Here’s what happened next:

“It was time for some deep research: with my wife’s help and inputs from my oncologist and other doctors, I pored over journal articles and other materials to understand my treatment options and their risks. For example, we learned that the surveillance course could take over five years before one could consider themselves cancer-free.”

Here we can see the process – the exact steps he took to approach the obstacle. Too many applicants leave out their process. You need to tell the adcom what you did, how you did it, and ideally how you engaged others to overcome the challenge as well. Even our cancer story here includes a team element (the wife and doctors).

Storytelling elements #8 and #9: Share the outcome AND Talk about lessons learned

“After weeks of research and deliberation, I opted for two rounds of outpatient chemotherapy. I said goodbye to my hair and hello to needles and nausea. The first week went well. But as I neared the second, my doctor called: the chemo had pushed my white blood cell count too low, compromising my immune system. I would have to wait. For two weeks I avoided raw fruits and vegetables and stayed inside as much as possible. My white blood cell count rose, and I completed the second week of chemo.

“Now, over eight years later, I’m considered cured, a survivor. The only physical residue of my treatment is slightly wavier hair. But the experience reinforced the importance of a proactive approach (I found out most men wait over six months to get lumps checked), of careful due diligence in health and other matters, and of never giving up. I carry those lessons into everything I do. So, I was right: the lump changed my life in a big way; but I never could have guessed how positive those changes would be.”

The last part of our story brings more process (how our survivor made a decision) and another twist (his low white blood cell count), along with the outcome and lessons learned . These last two elements typically tie together: the outcome (surviving cancer) reinforced multiple lessons, as noted above. It’s easy to spend too little (i.e. none) or too much (i.e. paragraphs) time on lessons learned; generally, 1-3 lines gets the job done.

It’s always recommended to wrap up your story by returning to your opening, to end with a killer ending with a broader theme or key realization or glimpse of the future.

Our story has just over 400 words, but it has all the important elements.

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This article was co-authored by Stephanie Wong Ken, MFA . Stephanie Wong Ken is a writer based in Canada. Stephanie's writing has appeared in Joyland, Catapult, Pithead Chapel, Cosmonaut's Avenue, and other publications. She holds an MFA in Fiction and Creative Writing from Portland State University. There are 9 references cited in this article, which can be found at the bottom of the page. This article has been fact-checked, ensuring the accuracy of any cited facts and confirming the authority of its sources. This article has been viewed 357,018 times.

Attention-grabbing introductions can draw your reader in and encourage them to keep reading. They help to set the tone and establish the narrative voice early on in an essay, a paper, or a speech. Grab the reader’s attention by opening with a quote or fact. Asking a question or presenting a strong statement can help keep your reader engaged. You can also use storytelling to get their attention and draw them in.

Opening with a Quote, Definition, or Fact

Step 1 Pick a short quote from the text that relates to your topic.

For example, you may pick a bold quote from a play by Shakespeare you are discussing to open the essay so your reader is drawn in. You may write, “Early in the play Hamlet by William Shakespeare, the troubled prince notes: ‘This above all: to thine own self be true.’ Themes of identity and self-hood appear many times throughout the play.”
Always cite any quotes you use in your introduction using the proper citation style, according to your instructor’s requirements for your paper or essay.

Step 2 Avoid quotes that are clichés or overly familiar.

For example, you may write, “In Shakespeare’s Othello , love is not blind, it is all seeing. As Othello notes, ‘For she had eyes and she chose me.’”

For example, you may write, “Every year, 25,000 people die due to drunk driving in the United States” or “One in five women will be raped in the United States.”

For example, you may write, “When the city gentrifies an area, it renovates and improves a neighborhood so it conforms to middle-class tastes.” Or you may write, “When an area is gentrified, it becomes more refined and polite for some, but not all.”

Beginning with a Question or Statement

Step 1 Make the question provocative and thought-provoking.

For example, you may use a question like, “What if we lived in a world where women were not constantly under threat of violence?” or “Why shouldn’t everyone have access to free healthcare in America?”

For example, rather than start with a question like, “Have you ever thought about the consequences of your actions?” you may rephrase it as, “Why is it important to consider the consequences of our actions?”

Step 3 Use a statement that describes your perspective.

For example, you may write, “Shakespeare’s Othello is a play about the doomed nature of love and the power of desire.” Or you may write, “Drunk driving is an epidemic in America that seems to only get worse every year.”

Step 4 State your opinion with “I believe” or “From my perspective.”

For example, you may write, “I believe our country needs to acknowledge fundamental issues in its democracy” or “From my perspective, there is no need to have multiple political parties in a democracy.”

Step 5 Write a statement that discusses a position you are going to challenge.

For example, you may write, “Right-wing conservatives believe immigrants are to blame for many of the issues facing America today. I am going to explore how and why this position is flawed.”

Step 6 Start with an exaggerated or hyperbolic statement.

For example, you may write, “I am been fascinated with death since I was 16” or “There is no greater joy to me than an empty bed where I can be alone, away from the world.”

Using Storytelling

Step 1 Tell a personal anecdote that relates to your topic.

For example, you may write, “The other day in the supermarket, I heard a child talking to his mother. ‘Why aren’t we getting the ones with marshmallows in them?’ he demanded, pointing at the boxes of cereal. He threw a tantrum in the aisle until his mother relented, throwing the sugary cereal into their cart. Standing in the aisle, watching the child, I couldn’t help but think about how children’s diets are becoming more and more unhealthy.”

Step 2 Make a statistic or fact come to life in a story.

For example, you may take a fact about drunk driving and write a short story like, “The young driver cranks up the stereo and grins as he thinks about the fun he had at the house party, plenty of cold beer and shots of whiskey. Suddenly, a tree appears ahead. He’s swerved off the road and it’s too late. The police later find him dead in the car due to driving while under the influence.”

Step 3 Use an emotional experience in your life.

For example, if you are writing about eating disorders in fashion, you may describe your own experiences with body image. You may write, “Flipping through my mother’s fashion magazines, I learned at a young age that being skinny was glamorous and desirable. This “fact” would haunt me into my teenage years, as I struggled with my weight and body image.”

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Good Attention Grabbers for Essays

Top 4 Attention Getters

1. ask a question, 2. tell a story, 3. tell a joke, 4. use comparisons.

Attention Grabbers for a Persuasive or Argumentative Papers

Attention Grabbers for a Descriptive Paper

Attention grabbers for contrast papers.

Draw people into reading your essay (for example informative essay or 500 word essay) by making your introduction interesting and intriguing with the first sentence it starts with. The best way to do that is by using attention-catching hooks. These are to engage your audience, spark curiosity in them, and make people wonder what happens next. Therefore, you are to make your introduction stand out and work for you. So what attention grabbers work best in essay writing, and how to make sure that the first sentence of the introductory paragraph makes your readers curious?

You can use a variety of attention grabbers for your piece; however, some hooks work better for particular assignments. So instead of guessing how to create a compelling attention-getter, just check our selection of the best hooks that will steal your readers’ attention in one go. Alternatively, you can always order professional assistance for, academic essay writers in case you doubt your writing talent.

One of the most effective ways to start a paper is to pose a question to the reader. In such a way, you can raise a reader’s personal interest in your writing and make him continue reading your piece in full. However, in order to formulate the question in the right way, you need to know your audience well. Otherwise, you risk failing to hit the target. At the same time, you are to ensure that the introductory question directs the reader to continue the thought or to find the answer within your paper. But don’t make your question too general.

Let’s say you write about cars. Starting your piece with the question “ do you have a car? ” will hardly impress your audience. It will hardly engage people in critical thinking. A good question hook should make the reader reply with a “hmm” instead of bringing a “yes-no” response. That’s why a good and effective question attention-getter should sound similar to “ have you ever wondered why all the cars in the UK are all right-hand drive? ” Consult our blog on how to develop critical hinking skills to create thought-provoking attention grabbers.

You can also tell a personal story. Readers love stories; well-written stories are always memorable and raise interest in people. The key to a great story hook is making it directly connected to the main theme of the assignment. This approach is best suited for essays about yourself , personal narratives or scholarship essays and will hardly work in more formal types of academic assignments.

Starting your piece with the sentence “ When I was thinking about this topic, I came up with an idea that... ” Such an introductory sentence sounds too banal and is more likely to disappoint than to interest people. With such a story hook, you will never distinguish your paper from the crowd.

The easiest way to catch readers’ interest is to tell them a funny story. An anecdote hook is appropriate for a narrative or descriptive essay . Even if you do not consider your piece humorous, a funny opening can still work. A little humor helps to win readers’ focus and raise their interest in the topic. Just ensure that the joke is short and relates to the main idea of your piece - and you will improve your essay.

Use metaphors or comparisons to engage readers in your work and make them think about a theme in a different way. The easiest way to impress your reader is to compare your paper topic to something that seems unrelated. An example of an effective metaphor is - A business blog is a magnet pulling customers to a company . Follow the same logic when composing a hook in essay , and you will definitely intrigue your reader.

Attention Grabbers for a Persuasive or Argumentative Papers

When writing a persuasive paper, you are to make your reader adopt a particular belief and side with you in a particular question without generalization. Your mission is to impact his thinking with the very first sentence. The easiest and most effective way to do so is to start your piece with a surprising fact, statistics, or quotation. Thus, you will spark your reader's curiosity to learn more.

If you do not know how to start a descriptive piece, then write a story. It is important that your story includes the senses and lets people taste, smell, feel, hear, or see the main object or subject that you are going to write about. Just give your reader a feeling of being right there and experiencing the situation with you.

Jumping right in with a contrasting thesis statement can be a great way to engage your reader with this type of paper. Thus, you will immediately introduce readers to your main argument to argue and let them get used to it from the very beginning of your writing.

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How to Use Attention-Grabbers to Engage Your Audience (With Examples)

The Speaker Lab
June 19, 2024

Ever found yourself tuning out during a speech or presentation? We’ve all been there. Capturing an audience’s attention is no easy feat, but it’s crucial for effective communication. That’s why in this article we’ll explore some attention-grabber examples that can transform your next talk or piece of writing. From rhetorical questions to startling statistics, these techniques are designed to hook your listeners right from the start. As you’ll soon find, the power of a good opener can’t be overstated.

What Are Attention-Grabbers?

An attention-grabber is a technique used to capture your audience’s interest right from the start, whether you’re giving a speech, writing an article, or teaching a class. No matter your context, attention grabbers serve a crucial purpose: they make your audience want to keep listening. They create a connection and pique curiosity, setting the stage for the rest of your message to be heard.

Types of Attention-Grabbers

There are many different types of attention-grabbers you can use, depending on your topic and audience. For example, you could start off by including humor, thought-provoking questions, surprising statistics, personal anecdotes, vivid descriptions, or powerful quotes. The key is choosing an attention-getter that feels authentic and relevant to your overall message.

Purpose of Using Attention-Grabbers

Also known as a “hook,” an attention-grabber helps get your audience interested in what you have to say. It’s a way to stand out, create a positive first impression, and motivate people to keep engaging with your content. A strong attention-getter sets the tone and lays the groundwork for a memorable message.

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Examples of Rhetorical Questions to Use as Attention-Grabbers

Before you can use a rhetorical question as your attention-grabber, you first have to know what one is. A rhetorical question is a question asked to make a point, rather than to get an answer. It’s a thought-provoking way to get your audience to reflect on your message and engage with your content on a deeper level.

In order to use a rhetorical question effectively as an attention-grabber, make sure it’s relevant to your topic and audience. It should spark curiosity and lead naturally into the rest of your content. So avoid questions with obvious answers, and don’t overuse this technique—one or two well-placed rhetorical questions are usually enough. Below are a few examples of rhetorical questions you might use as your attention-grabber.

“What if I told you that everything you know about [topic] is wrong?”
“Have you ever wondered what the world would be like if [scenario]?”
“Why do we [common behavior], even though we know [consequence]?”

Rhetorical questions are a powerful way to get your audience thinking and create a sense of intrigue around your message. When used strategically, they can be an incredibly effective attention-grabber.

Using Quotes to Grab Your Audience’s Attention

Another way to start a speech or article is with a compelling quote. There’s just something about the wisdom and authority of a well-chosen quote that immediately lends credibility to your message . When you cite a respected figure or expert in your field, it shows that you’ve done your research and that your ideas are backed by others. Quotes can also be a great way to evoke emotion or set a certain tone for your content.

Choosing the Right Quote

When selecting a quote to use as an attention grabber, look for something that is relevant to your topic and audience. Additionally, the quote should be memorable and meaningful, and it should come from a reputable source. Avoid overused or clichéd quotes, and make sure to properly attribute the quote to its original speaker or author. For example, notice how each of the quotes below has its original speaker listed directly after, making them perfect attention-grabbers.

“The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.” – Franklin D. Roosevelt
“Innovation distinguishes between a leader and a follower.” – Steve Jobs
“The way to get started is to quit talking and begin doing.” – Walt Disney

A well-chosen quote can be a powerful way to grab your audience’s attention and set the stage for a persuasive and memorable message. Just remember to use quotes sparingly and strategically for maximum impact.

Engaging Your Audience with Startling Statistics

Want to instantly grab your audience’s attention and show them why your message matters? Try starting with a surprising statistic that relates to your topic. Statistics are powerful attention-grabbers because they confront your audience with a concrete, indisputable fact that challenges their assumptions. When used effectively, a startling statistic can create a sense of urgency and make your audience more receptive to your message.

How to Find Relevant Statistics

To find startling statistics to use as attention grabbers, look for reputable sources like academic journals, government reports, and industry publications. In addition, make sure the statistic is current, accurate, and directly relevant to your topic. Avoid statistics that are overly complex or difficult to understand—the goal is to create an immediate impact.

Examples of Statistics to Use as an Attention-Grabber

“Did you know that [shocking percentage] of [group] experiences [problem]?”
“Every [timeframe], [large number] of [things] are [action].”
“By [year], experts predict that [shocking trend] will [predicted outcome].”

Startling statistics are a highly effective way to grab your audience’s attention and make them sit up and take notice. Just be sure to choose your statistics carefully and that you’ve fact-checked each one.

Grabbing Attention with Anecdotes and Personal Stories

There are plenty of examples of attention-grabbers that you can use to engage your audience. Of these, one of the most powerful ways to connect with an audience is by sharing a personal story or anecdote. There’s just something about a well-told story that immediately draws people in and creates a sense of empathy and connection.

The Power of Storytelling

Stories are a fundamental part of how we communicate and make sense of the world. When you share a personal story or anecdote, you’re inviting your audience to step into your shoes and see the world through your eyes. This creates a powerful emotional connection that can make your message more relatable and memorable.

How to Craft a Compelling Anecdote

To use an anecdote as an attention-grabber, choose a story that is relevant to your topic and audience. The story should have a clear beginning, middle, and end, and it should illustrate a key point or lesson. Use vivid sensory details to bring the story to life, and practice telling the story out loud to refine your delivery.

Examples of Anecdotes to Use as an Attention-Grabber

“When I was [age], I had an experience that changed my perspective on [topic] forever.”
“I’ll never forget the day I learned the hard way that [lesson].”
“Growing up, my [family member] always used to say [quote]. It wasn’t until years later that I truly understood what they meant.”

Personal stories and anecdotes are a powerful way to grab your audience’s attention and create a lasting emotional connection. By sharing a piece of yourself, you can make your message more authentic, relatable, and unforgettable.

Using Humor to Hook Your Audience

If you want to liven up your presentation, then humor is your secret weapon. The right quip or amusing story not only breaks the monotony, but also makes sure people are hooked and stay focused on your message. Humor also helps to break the ice and create a sense of rapport between you and your audience.

How to Use Humor Appropriately

Of course, not all humor is appropriate for all audiences or situations. When using humor as an attention-grabber, it’s important to know your audience and choose jokes that are relevant and inoffensive. In addition, avoid humor that criticizes others or relies on stereotypes. If you need ideas, consider the examples below, all of which are perfectly suitable as an attention-grabber.

“I always wanted to be a [profession], but I soon realized I was better suited for [humorous alternative].”
“You know what they say – [common saying]. Well, I’m here to tell you that’s not always true. In fact, [humorous contradiction].”
“I once [humorous mistake or misunderstanding]. Needless to say, I learned my lesson.”

Used appropriately, humor can be a highly effective way to hook your audience and keep them engaged throughout your presentation. Just remember to keep it relevant, tasteful, and targeted to your specific audience.

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Incorporating Sensory Details to Capture Attention

Have you ever noticed how some speakers have a way of transporting you into their story? Chances are, they’re using vivid sensory details to create a rich, immersive experience for their audience. Sensory details are descriptive words and phrases that appeal to the five senses: sight, sound, smell, taste, and touch. When you incorporate sensory details into your attention-grabber, you create a more vivid and memorable experience for your audience. This helps to grab their attention and keep them engaged with your message.

How to Use Sensory Language Effectively

To use sensory language effectively, focus on the most relevant and evocative details for your topic and audience. Use specific, concrete language rather than vague or abstract descriptions. Engage multiple senses when possible, and use figurative language like metaphors and similes to paint a vivid picture in your audience’s mind.

Examples of Sensory Details to Use as an Attention-Grabber

“Imagine biting into a ripe, juicy peach, feeling the sticky juice run down your chin as the sweet, fragrant flavor explodes on your tongue.”
“Picture a serene mountain lake at dawn, the glassy surface of the water reflecting the pink and orange hues of the sky, the only sound the gentle lapping of the waves against the shore.”
“The acrid smell of smoke filled the air, stinging my eyes and throat as I stumbled through the darkness, my heart pounding in my chest.”

By incorporating sensory details into your attention-grabber, you can create a more immersive and engaging experience for your audience. Sensory language is a powerful tool for grabbing attention and making your message more memorable and impactful.

FAQs on Attention Grabbers

What is a good example of an attention grabber.

“Imagine living on Mars in 2040.” This question makes your audience think and draws them into the conversation.

What is a good attention getter?

A shocking statistic, like “Farmers and ranchers make up less than 2% of America’s population,” instantly hooks listeners by highlighting unexpected facts.

What are some attention grabbing phrases?

“Did you know that we have only explored 5% of the Earth’s oceans?” This phrase sparks curiosity and engagement right away.

What is an example of an attention grabbing hook?

Telling a brief story, such as how overcoming fear led to skydiving, captivates audiences with personal connection and anticipation for what’s next.

You now have some potent tools in your arsenal with these attention-grabber examples. Whether you’re starting with an intriguing question, a personal story, or eye-opening stats, each method serves to hook your audience and keep them engaged. The magic lies in choosing the right one for the moment and delivering it confidently. Keep practicing and refining, and soon enough grabbing attention will be second nature!

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15 Powerful Attention Getters for Any Type of Speech

Coming up with a great opening line has never been so easy thanks to these ideas.

Arguably, the hardest part of writing a speech is coming up with the perfect hook. The first sentence that comes out of your mouth sets the tone for everything that's going to follow. You need to pack the first few lines with attention getters to make your speech immediately engaging to the audience.

But you don't have to be inherently good at oration like Cicero or Martin Luther King Jr. Instead, you can use these clever tactics to rock your speech from start to finish.

Effective Ways to Grab an Audience's Attention for a Speech

No two orators have the same methods, so no two speeches should start the same way. Don't be afraid to experiment with different ideas to see which one resonates the most with your topic and delivery style.

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All beginners have to start somewhere, and these are some tried-and-true proven ways to grab an audience's attention right away:

1.Start With a Powerful Question

Asking a thought-provoking question can stimulate your audience's curiosity and get them feeling interested in hearing what you plan to follow up with.

2. Use Humor to Break the Tension

Lighthearted jokes or funny anecdotes can warm up the audience by breaking the tension. After a little laugh, they'll probably be more receptive to whatever your message is.

3. Open With an Interesting Statistic

An unexpected or shocking statistic can spark interest and emphasize a major selling point of your topic. Simple stats can also be very punchy, so they make a big impact.

4. Tell a Story

Humans love a narrative, so you can start with a personal or relevant story that makes connections to the various points of your speech in an indirect way.

5. Use a Visual Element

Incorporating graphics, videos, props, or diagrams can add a new dimension to your speech and keep your audience's short attention span locked on you.

6. Quote a Famous Person

One way to open your speech is with an impactful quote from a respected figure to lend authority to your argument or topic.

7. Incorporate Interactive Features

Polls, question-and-answer sessions, or requesting audience members to share their experiences can keep your audience involved. You know what they say - idle hands are the devil's workshop.

8. Challenge Common Beliefs

Stating a contrary opinion or debunking a common myth can be an electric way to get the audience engaged.

9. Use Powerful and Emotive Language

This can draw people in and help them connect with your message on an emotional level. After all, there's a reason one of Cicero's branches of rhetoric is pathos.

10. Relate to your Audience

People like to listen to stuff they relate to, so you can start with a few examples or scenarios that are relatable to your audience's experience.

11. Use Sound Effects or Music

Audio elements can make your presentation more dynamic and memorable. It's hard to look away from a light show or someone sauntering up to the stage with a theme song.

12. Incorporate Physical Activity

Asking your audience to stand up, high five their neighbor, or do a simple exercise can re-energize them. This is especially useful if you're in a group of speeches and need to get the audience to reconnect with you.

13. Pose a Hypothetical Scenario

Paint a picture of a possible future or situation and you can pique your audience's interest.

14. Show Your Passion

Audiences tend to pay attention when speakers display genuine enthusiasm and conviction about their topic, so don't be afraid to get passionate. Inflect in your phrases and let your facial expressions run wild.

15. Surprise Your Audience

Doing something unexpected can break the routine and instantly grab the group's attention.

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Examples of Attention-Grabbing Phrases to Open a Speech

It's all good and well to know different methods for crafting your intro, but that doesn't magically help with putting the words together. Don't panic. We've got a whole host of attention-grabbing phrases you can use to open any speech with.

"Imagine if you could..."
"I'm going to reveal a secret that most experts don't want you to know."
"How many of you have ever experienced..."
"Let me start with an alarming fact..."
"Raise your hand if you believe..."
"Remember when you were a child and you believed in..."
"Here's a shocking statistic that will make your hair stand on end..."
"What if I told you that..."
"Let's take a journey back in time to..."
"I have a confession to make..."
"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times..."
"Picture this..."
"I bet you're wondering why I'm here today..."
"Let me tell you a story..."
"I was in your shoes once, and then something extraordinary happened..."
"There's an old saying that goes..."
"Have you ever thought about why..."
"Did you know that..."
"Who here thinks they know what it's like to..."
"It might sound crazy, but..."
"Has anyone in here ever..."
"Every second we waste, someone in the world is..."
"I want to share with you a life-changing experience I had..."
"When you wake up in the morning, do you ever feel..."
"We are standing on the precipice of..."
"There's a truth that no one talks about, and it's this..."
"Let's take a moment to reflect on..."
"The first time I ever experienced..."
"Who here is brave enough to admit..."
"Before we get started, I want to ask everyone a question..."

Use a Good Hook for a Successful Speech

People usually think about the mic drop moment towards the end of the speech and leave the opening bit for minutes before they go on. But reciting a speech isn't like performing open mic night at the comedy club.

You need a good hook to reel the audience in, and which one you use will depend on your audience, your topic, and what you want people to take away from your speech. The long and the short of it is, you might be able to procrastinate on writing your speech, but you probably don't want to leave the opener 'til last minute.

How to Write a Hook for Essay?

09 October, 2020

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Author: Elizabeth Brown

Want to know how to write a hook for an essay? Lack of ideas for a mind-blowing attention grabber? Don’t worry - we’ll guide you through the stern path of ignorance. The primary intention of any writer is to make a strong impression on readers right from the first sentence. After all, there’s nothing better than engaging pieces of writing that preserve attention more intensely than Marvel movies. And that’s a great hook which makes them so easily digestible and memorable. Of course, the process of generating ideas that spark interest is not as challenging as climbing the Everest mountain, but it does require some brainstorming anyway. If your dream is to learn the skill of creating original hooks for essays, then this article is for you.

What is a hook?

If you wonder how to start an essay , consider beginning with an attention grabber. A hook is a way of reaching your reader by means of capturing their attention to the writing piece. It’s an art of its own; only words is the main weapon here instead of brushes. Long story short, a hook is something alluring, something that makes readers fall in love with your text, forcing them to read every word with excitement. Sounds perplexing? Let’s move to examples.

Good attention grabbers

There are different types of hooks which you can use at the beginning of your paper, depending on the topic. The most commonly used ones include questions, quotes, statistics, or anecdotes. Each of the methods works equally well for any essay, but keep in mind that the way you construct your essay hook will affect the essence of your overall work. Hence, make sure that your attention grabber is totally related to the paper topic.

Also, a good introduction doesn’t have to be a lip-smacking opening or a jaw-dropping revelation. There’s no need to reinvent the wheel. Instead, make great hooks that are simple for readers’ understanding and devoid of blatant gibberish, and don’t forget to add cherry on top to catch the interest of your audience. Now, let’s review some examples of good attention getters to get you started:

As you can see, this hook contains a joke, and it is deeply related to the pain most people feel when given a writing task. Therefore, such sentence starters for essays hook from first sight and make readers say “that’s so me!”. Got the idea? Let’s move to the next examples.

This hook questions readers and provides food for thought from the very first sentence. Also, this opening sentence invites to give an answer to the question and thus intensifies suspense. Ultimately, it makes readers eager to compare their response with that of an author.

This is an example of starting an essay with a quote, in which the introductory sentence begins with a famous quotation related to success. It calls for attention immediately and proves to readers that the text they are about to read will be not just interesting but also informative.

This is a statistic hook which introduces readers to the text with numbers right away. That’s because figures are the most reliable means of keeping attention. This way, the author encourages readers to think in terms of global dimensions and imagine the effect of a single number on the current working conditions.

From this extract, readers can learn a new, surprising fact they have never thought of before. Such a method of implementing a hook is called misconception revelation. The primary goal of using such a hook is to break one’s beliefs in half and glue them back with a fresh outlook on their previous perception of things.

This is an example of a fact hook. It’s most frequently used in informative pieces of writing, where the critical element of disclosing information is facts. In this case, the author starts the paper by stating a surprising fact which most readers have never heard of. This once again makes the audience wonder what information will follow, and inspires to read the text till the end.

Bonus tips for creating good attention grabbers

There are many different ideas you can use if you’re curious about how to make a right hook. Let’s review the most effective ones:

Write your hook after the whole essay is done.

Should the hook necessarily come before the main text? Nothing of the kind. It might sound a little weird, but this approach will help you decide on a hook that’ll best reflect the idea of your essay. For this, you can make a couple of easy steps:

Write a raw version of a thesis statement
Back up your thesis with evidence using examples for everybody paragraph
By the end of a paper, restate the thesis and write a conclusion
Look for ideas for your hook: statistic, anecdote, quotation, facts, etc.
Add the hook to the beginning of the introduction, keeping in mind that it should always relate to your essay topic.

Play with several versions of a hook for one essay.

Who said you have to limit yourself with one chosen attention grabber? Look for as many paragraph starters as you need, and then play with them, adding each one to check if they suit or not. It’s just like with shopping – you put on several things to decide on the best color, size, and model. In the case of essay writing, you can jot down a couple of facts or jokes and add each to the introduction until you see that one is the best fit for your work.

People are hardwired to seek originality in trivial things. Otherwise, their brains refuse to perceive information which they are well aware of. That’s why, as an author of your masterpiece, you should strive to engage readers into the discussion from the start to the end. Remember – hook sentences are not meant to reduce the causes of boredom. They are a treatment for it. So it’s up to you to decide whether to create a catchy hook for your essay or whether to leave readers with nothing to think about.

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ATTENTION GRABBERS: OPENING AND CLOSING

GAMBITS FOR WRITING

Johnie H. Scott, M.A., M.F.A.

Associate Professor of Pan African Studies

California State University , Northridge

Key Concepts:

1) proactive

2) gambit

3) mull

4) thesis statement

5) heartfelt

6) adept

7) synergy

8) synergistic

Introduction:

I’ve prepared this with three purposes in mind that are all related to improving the ability of aspiring writers to (1) capture the audience’s attention from the onset with effective, clearly-written and articulated openings for paragraphs and longer compositions, (2) present cleanly-written and carefully-formulated thesis statements, and (3) finish compositions with strong, forceful conclusions that leave the reader talking and with something to think about.

I want to acknowledged a scholarly debt of gratitude to John Langan (i.e., College Writing Skills ), Ronald S. Lunsford and Bill Bridges (i.e., The Longwood Guide to Writing ), Philip Eggers (i.e., Process & Practice ), and Tammy L. Boeck and Megan C. Rainey ( Connections: Writing, Reading and Critical Thinking ) for their own work in the area of opening and closing essay stratagems. At the same time, credit must also be given to Deanne K. Milan (i.e., Developing Reading Skills ) and John Roloff (i.e., Paragraphs ) for the extensive attention they gave to improving the reading and basic writing skills of young writers.

Finally, a sincere note of appreciation has to be extended to my colleagues and associates in the Writing Program of the Pan African Studies Department at California State University, Northridge from the time this was first written some 15 years ago in 1986: Dr. Rosentene B. Purnell (Professor Emeritus and founder of the PAS Writing Program as well as author of Bridges: Ways of Approaching Written Discourse ), Dr. Tom Spencer-Walters (Chairperson of the Department and founding editor of Kapu-Sens ), and Professors King Edward Carter, Professor and author Herbert A. Simmons (i.e., Man Walking On Eggshells , Corner Boy and Tough Country ), and Eric Priestley (i.e., author of Raw Dog and Abracadabra ). I thank each for the insights and observations over the years of commitment to developing voices among the students matriculating through the PAS Writing Program. To Simmons and Priestley, in particular, I give a heartfelt thanks for continuing the Watts Writers Workshop tradition of which we were all part of.

Much has been made over the years about the importance of experience – very simply, of working at one’s craft…whatever that craft might be. In Robert Townsend’s critically-acclaimed feature film The Five Heartbeats, the central character is an aspiring writer. We hear the statement made by this character (played by Townsend) , “To be a true writer, you have to suffer before learning what writing really is.”

Well, my mother, who was not a writer, was not nearly so fanciful in saying to me during my grade school years that I would “have to pay a lot of dues before amounting to anything in this world.” For those reading this, I am saying that writing is not something to be mastered in five easy lessons. Writing has to be worked at – and worked at constantly, every single day. You have to read along the way – whether that reading take the form of newspapers, news magazines, comic books, popular fiction like Walter Mosley’s Walkin ’ the Dog , cultural criticism such as that done by Michael Eric Dyson with Race Rules: Navigating the Color Line , or major writers like Toni Morrison with Paradise or Ralph Ellison’s Juneteenth . The point I’m making is that a person reads in order to develop, expand and appreciate the power of the word, of vocabulary, of being able to express themselves without stretching for meanings beyond their grasp.

Having said that, my intent is to present another approach to writing. This article is based upon my own experiences as a writer and in the classroom – and I do this as someone whose ability and love for writing enabled me to move up out of the Jordan Downs Housing Projects in South central Los Angeles, pass through Harvard, Stanford and Antioch Universities, and settle into a position where I can now share my love for the craft and love of writing itself with others. For those of you concerned solely with writing better paragraphs and essays, what I have to say should offer some insights on accomplishing that task. For those of you, though, who see writing as a means to affect social attitudes and change the way people view issues (and one another), perhaps what I have to say will help jar some now thoughts into existence. I certainly hope so.

“The Hook”: Getting the Reader’s Attention

How many times have you opened your mailbox to see one of those large, brown envelopes with large lettering boldly announcing that you have been “Pre-Approved” and stand to be “An Instant Winner! ” It doesn’t matter that the letter may have come from some publishing clearinghouse. You take a seat in your living room, perhaps at the breakfast nook in your kitchen where you then pause for a moment or two while hefting the envelope from one hand to the other. In your mind, you imagine what it would be like to be a sweepstakes winner – and think back to that happy face of the person who hit the Super Lottery for $70 million. You find yourself thinking of what being an “instant winner” could do in changing your own personal fortunes: payoff outstanding loans, clear past due accounts from your credit report, make it finally possible to take that “Dream Vacation.” Perhaps you even call in family, or a close friend, telling them about this strange letter – wanting them present when you open the envelope.

You do so very carefully, removing the contents which include the facsimile of a $100,000 check bearing your name and a series of numbers --- one of which, you are told, is yours “to keep” and follow in the hope that it will be drawn at a lottery sometime in the not-so-distant future. Excited now with the adrenalin pumping, you put the number series to the side and read on. This is when you get “the pitch” from the company sponsoring the lottery: purchase one or more of their products with the notation that “failing to do so will not detract from your ability to win the $100,000 Grand Sweepstakes Prize!”

In marketing circles, this is referred to as “The Hook”: it is a 20-second window of opportunity wherein marketers gain your attention and make their sale. That 20-second window of opportunity is true for all audiences. Knowing that it exists and how to make the most effective use of that window is one of the reasons why good writers use strategies to immediately gain the reader’s attention. Good writers know that one of the most serious errors that can be made is by opening up right away with the main purpose of the writing – this is an automatic turnoff for the reader!

Think back to that brown, “Pre-Approved Instant Winner” envelope with the facsimile check! Imagine that same envelope in your mailbox, opening it up and immediately being hit on the head with “Buy this.” Without a doubt, that envelope would go sailing into the trash can. With today’s audiences becoming increasingly sophisticated and demanding, there is a premium on the attention span available. You have to make the most of that time. Knowing about and being able to make effective use of the various opening strategies can only enhance your skills as a writer.

There are, as a matter of fact, seven (7) proven opening gambits or strategies for one’s paragraphs and/or longer compositions:

1) Begin with a broad, general statement that you narrow down to your thesis statement . Keep in mind that the thesis provides the main idea for the entire composition;

2) Use a question or series of thought-provoking questions . When using this gambit, it is very effective to state these questions as a series of one-liners (i.e., paragraphs) before getting to the thesis. Just keep in mind at all times that the questions you raise do more than merely set a tone for your paper, those questions sooner or later must be answered;

3) Use quotations. The best quotes are those drawn from popular culture, from the social literature the general public (i.e., your targeted audience) is acquainted with. If you are writing to a politically conservative audience, then you might want to open with a quote from a noted conservative. If the audience is perceived as a hip, upwardly-mobile group of African-American women, then you might want to open with a statement from someone like Joan Morgan, bell hooks, June Jordan, Sonia Sanchez, Alice Walker or Sistah Souljah . If, on the other hand, you are directing your message to a teenaged readership based in the urban core, you might want to open with a quote from the socially conscious lyrics by one of the leading rap artists or groups. Who would you use, for instance, if the paper was centered on the problems caused by gang violence? Use quotes, in other words, that connect with your audience!

4) Use an anecdote. All audiences enjoy a story, particularly those with human interest. In this instance, you are putting a face (or faces) to your composition by drawing upon an incident containing a moral center, one that you can then use in leading your audience to the thesis statement. Here again, the best anecdotes are those coming from popular culture: from stories and events that people are aware of and talking about.

5) State the importance of the topic. You do this by presenting statistical data, facts, figures that underscore the issues about to be discussed. The data must be pertinent, validated and presented in an objective manner free of any editorializing – the facts speak for themselves;

6) Use the opposite of what you plan to write about. This is done for dramatic effect, as in “What if the world were like this instead of what the world, or situation about to be discussed, truly is?” Readers are often fascinated, intrigued by this type of approach; And lastly,

7) Use a combination of the strategies. This is best done by using two of the six gambits. Your more skilled writers frequently make use of this, the seventh and final opening gambit.

The Thesis Statement

All of these opening strategies, or essay gambits, have one purpose and that is to focus the audience on your purpose for writing: your thesis statement. This statement is best seen as a single, complete sentence containing the main idea of the entire composition with at least three (3) patterns by which you intend to develop and support that subject. You could not write a very good or insightful essay, for example, if your thesis was “The Hyundai is a great car.” That statement by itself is both vague and general. It has no focus and fails to give the audience anything in terms of where the composition is going. On the other hand, the audience receives a clear sense of direction from a thesis statement that reads “Because of its great gas mileage, low maintenance, and outstanding road handling on highways and city streets, the Hyundai is a great car.”

From this thesis statement, we know that you are going to write about (1) the great gas mileage a Hyundai gets in comparison to other cars, (2) the low maintenance and monies saved in repairs with the Hyundai in contrast to other vehicles, and (3) the responsive way the Hyundai handles on the road in relationship to other cars on the highways and city streets. Those three patterns of development all contribute to and support the main idea, which is that the Hyundai is a great car. They do so in a logical, orderly fashion which is what your readership expects in a well-organized composition.

By the same token, you need to now about the four (4) most common errors made when fashioning thesis statements:

Do not make announcement. One of the sure signs of the struggling writer is the telltale “In this paper I am going to write about” or the even more deadly (and monotonous) “The purpose of this paper is…” Announcements are a sure way of insulting the intelligence of your readership. Don’t make announcements (“For the next 750 words I am going to…” which leads the reader to start counting your words rather than concentrating on what you are trying to communicate!) or tell the reader what you plan to write about – allow the writing to communicate the story!
Do not make the thesis too broad. This happens when the writer has failed to carefully think out or plan what the actual subject is going to be. Imagine a thesis statement that asserts “The Civil War was the turning point in American race relations.” Scholars, historians, and many others have written volumes on that subject! This is not the sort of thesis statement you would put forth for a research paper or essay topic due the following week. It is entirely too broad and general.
Do not make the thesis statement too narrow or specific. Again, this is a result of failing to fully think through what one is going to write about. It is very much like painting oneself into a corner, away from any exit, and being left with no way out. Imagine, for example, having to write a paper with the thesis being “This table is made out of wood.” While such a sentence might lend itself to a few sentences (at best), one certainly could not hope to go any further than that. By always incorporating those three (3) patterns of development into your thesis statement, the error of being too narrow or specific will be avoided; and finally,
Do not make your thesis statement too vague. This error usually results from fuzzy, unclear thinking. If the thesis is unclear to you, then it will be unclear and, even worse, confusing to your readers. “The California Condor is an interesting bird” does nothing for the reader. It invites confusion by raising too many questions. “Interesting” meaning what? To who? Why? Here, once again, the confusion can be avoided by incorporating those three (3) patterns of development into the thesis statement.

Synergy – Bringing Everything Together:

Effective writing comes, first of all, from being precise and logical in one’s thinking process. When structuring paragraphs, essays and other compositions that work for the reader – and keep in mind that when writing for the public, that audience always comes first! – consideration must be given to capturing and then holding the attention of the reader. You accomplish this by using the opening gambits or strategies that I have identified here, each of which leads the reader to what hopefully will be a well-formulated, clearly-articulated thesis statement (i.e., the main idea of the entire composition). Your reader(s) should be able to follow that thesis in a logical and orderly fashion to the conclusion.

I like telling my students, however, that concluding or wrapping up a paper is just as important as getting the reader’s attention in the first place. You want to writer something that leaves an impression in the mind of your audience, a belief that they have been given something of considerable worth. This is best achieved by using any one of the following six (6) closing gambits (Again, there are actually eight but students who follow-through with me into 155 Freshman Composition will pickup the remaining two at that level):

1) Restate the main points raised in the paper. What you are doing here is to repeat for your readers those patterns of development first articulated in the thesis statement; in effect, you are now tying the package together.

2) Close with a quotation. This can be a very effective means for closing out an essay. It adds style and grace to the writing. The best quotes, again, come out of popular culture or wisdom. The quote(s) should be directly related to the subject matter. Using quotes definitely gives your audience the impression that you are in control of the material.

3) Close with an anecdote. Once more, we are dealing with readability. Audiences love good stories, those that have a core, a sensibility. The writer who can close a composition with a brief story is certainly going to leave a memorable impression on the readers.

4) Restate the main point and end with a thought- provoking question . Anytime you can focus the audience on the main point of your writing, then leave them with something to mull over once they have finished the reading, then you have succeeded.

5) End with a prediction or recommendation based upon the subject matter. Remember that the prediction reflects what might or will take place if the assertion in your thesis is not followed through or acted upon. This engages the audience into actions which is always a positive effect. In the same vein, giving the audience a recommendation or series of recommendations is effective in that you are providing them with a list of actions they can take. This moves the audience from passive readers to active doers.

6) End with a Call for Action. This is proactive, engaging writing that makes your audience aware that what they have read is not merely brain candy, but a serious call by the writer for them to act upon what has been put on the table. This conclusion keeps your readership stimulated.

7) Close with a thought-provoking question, one that stands by itself and leads the reader to wonder, “ What if?”

Good writing calls for practice and commitment. One of the keys to being an effective writer is remembering your audience, keeping them in mind, understanding that the best audience is one that takes an active rather than passive role in reading what it is that you are trying to get across. The opening and closing strategies that have been discussed here are proven means for accomplishing that exact purpose. At the same time, you have been given a list of the do’s and don’ts in developing thesis statements. To become really adept at writing, though, you have to read: widely and broadly. Reading will give you access not only to new information but, even more, will expose you to different writing styles and ways of expression that can only enhance and improve your own.

Discussion Questions:

1) The author provides seven (7) different gambits or strategies for starting one’s paper. What are those seven and provide your own original example(s) in explaining each one.

2) What is a thesis statement? The author lists the four most common errors in the construction of thesis statements. What are those errors and which one(s) give you the greatest difficulty? Why?

3) In this essay, you have been provided with eight different techniques for concluding one’s paragraphs and longer compositions. Identify each of the eight techniques and briefly give your own, original examples and illustrations in explaining each one.

4) What has been the greatest value or insight this particular assignment has given you? Why? In what way(s) has it expanded on your previous knowledge and awareness of ways in which to open and close your writing.

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33 Attention Grabbers You Need to Try

Heather Wagoner
July 21, 2021
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?SHARK BAIT…

…OOH! HA! HA!

Raise your hand if you’ve heard that before ^^^. ???‍♀️ (Probably too much if you teach primary kiddos.)

Now that I’ve got your attention, let’s talk ATTENTION GRABBERS ! (See what I did there?)

So, you’re ready to start your lesson, now what? Maybe the class needs some redirection to the next activity, what do you do? Please don’t say, “I’ll just wait.” If you do you’ll ALWAYS have that one student who’s like, “Oh, yeah! I can talk all day!” You’ll end up frustrated even before the lesson begins and nobody’s got time for that.

Attention grabbers are INCREDIBLE tools to have in your teacher bag of tricks!

Teaching tiny humans requires a little FLAIR , so I’ve got 33 UNIQUE , ENGAGING , and QUICK attention grabbers to start your lessons or redirect the class. My class favorites were always #1 , #5 , #13 , #16 , #24 , and #29 !

Attention Grabber 1- “Shark Bait!”

“Ooh, ha ha!” The teacher calls out “Shark Bait!” Students reply with “ooh, ha ha!” This attention-getter is always a hit with younger kiddos, especially those who adore Nemo and Dory!

2- Doorbell!??

Yes, a doorbell! Amazon has these awesome doorbells that you plug anywhere in your room. Keep the button near you and whenever you need their attention, ring the bell. My class loved ours!

3- Flat Tire!

What sounds does a flat tire make? “ SSSHHHHHH .” The teacher calls out “flat tire!” and students respond with “ssshhhhhh!”

4- “Holy Moly!”

“Guacamole!” Love tacos and guac? ? This call and response is for you and your class!

Attention Grabber 5- Vanilla Ice Inspired

T- “Ice, Ice!” S- “Baby!”

T- “Alright stop!” S- “Collaborate and Listen!”

6- “Hocus Pocus!”

“Everybody Focus!” I love me some Hocus Pocus! This is a personal favorite of mine, especially during the fall! ??

7- Whole Brain Teaching

WBT is all about engaging the “whole brain” when teaching. My favorite WBT call and response is “Class class!” and they respond, “yes yes!” The catch is the students MUST respond in the same voice as the teacher. High pitched, low monster tone, whispered, etc.

8- “Macaroni and Cheese!

”Everybody freeze!” Then they freeze like a statue.

Attention Grabber 9- Golden Arches! ?

Teacher- “Ba da ba ba ba” Students- “I’m Lovin it!” I prefer Chick-Fil-A but hey, it’s just for FUN and the kids enjoy it! ?

10- Use a Wind Chime

Think about the soothing sound of a wind chime. Reminds me of being outdoors, birds chirping, gentle breeze, the smell of fresh-cut grass. Now think about how soothing that sound could be as an attention-getter. They hear the sound and stop what they’re doing.

Attention Grabber 11- “1, 2, 3, Eyes on Me!”

Students- “1, 2, eyes on you!” Model for them how they stop, turn to you and listen for instructions.

12- “Peanut Butter!”

“And jelly!” Simple attention grabber, yet still creative!

Attention Grabber 13- Compound words

Why not incorporate a skill into your attention getter with compound words? The teacher says the first word and the students say the second. Any compound word will work as long as you model for them how to stop, look, and listen once they complete the word. Here are some examples:

“Apple” “Sauce”
“Pop” “Corn”
“Hot” “Dog”
“Butter” “Fly”
“Milk” “Shake”

14- Ready to Line Up?

How about this one for lining up:

Teacher- “1, 2”

Student- “3, 4”

Teacher- “Let’s go”

Student- “Out the door!”

Attention Grabber 15- “If You Can Hear My Voice…

…clap once.” I cannot tell you how many times I’ve used that call and response. It works like magic. The key here is starting at a whisper but not going over a regular talking voice. Kids start to wonder why some are clapping so they stop talking to listen. Boom!

16- Bologna!

When you introduce this one, make sure you play the commercial. The kids will LOVE it. T- “My bologna has a first name!” S- “It’s O-S-C-A-R!”

Attention Grabber 17- Microphone ?

Sometimes all you need is a unique presentation! Cue, class microphone ! Not only is it different, but the students get excited to use it too! Make sure to model expectations when using it.

18- “Hands on Top!”

“That means stop!” Model how you expect them to stop, place their hands on their heads and look to you for instructions.

19- “Who Let the Dogs Out?”

“Who, who, who?” Now the song will be stuck in your head. You’re welcome! ?

20- Clap it Out

Want to include some rhythm in your routine? Clap a rhythm and have the kids repeat it. Change it up often to keep it engaging for the students.

Attention Grabber 21- “Goodness, Gracious!”

“Great balls of fire?!”

22- “Red Robin!”

“YUMMMMM!” ? Got a Red Robin in your area? Toss this attention grabber in, I guarantee some of your students will know it!

23- “Spaghetti and…”

“Meatballs” ? Again, I’m hungry now.

24- “Chicka, Chicka”

“Boom! Boom!” This attention grabber is PERFECT for preschool classrooms that have read this book! My son LOVES Chicka Chicka Boom Boom!

Attention Grabber 25- Toy Story Inspired

T- “To Infinity!” S- “And Beyond!”
T- “You’ve got a…” S- “Friend in Me!”

26- “M-I-C-K-E-Y”

“M-O-U-S-E” Be sure to sing it in your BEST Disney voice for dramatic effect! ?

⭐️ Teach older students? These next few are specifically for you! ⭐️

27- Attention to the Queen or King

T- “Hear ye, hear ye!”

S- “All hail the queen!” (or king)

This is great if you teach literature!

28- Teach 5th grade?

T- “Team 5!”

S- “Is alive!”

Attention Grabber 29- Growth Mindset

T- “A Mistake is a Chance”

S- “To Try Again!”

I love this growth mindset-inspired attention grabber!

30- Incorporate tech

T- “Knowledge is POWER. Point to power!”

S- (points to the source of power- SmartBoard, computer, etc.)

Play a quick 5 seconds of their favorite song. Model how they need to respond (get quiet, get out materials, look at you, etc). If they model expectations right away, you’ll let the song continue for a couple more seconds (giving that the song is appropriate for school).

32- “All Set!”

“You Bet!” For older kids, I’ve found that simpler is sometimes better. ?

Attention Grabber 33- Inspired by Songs

These next few are all inspired by popular songs, past and present. Get your best singing voice ready for these, your older students will love them:

T- “Feelin’ good…” S- “Like I should” (from Surfaces, Sunday Best)
T- “Sweet Caroline!” S- “Ba Ba Ba!” Need I explain? If you’ve EVER been to a sporting event (or bar), chances are, you’ve participated in this one.
T- “Dm, Dm, Dm, Dm, Dm, Dm, Dm, Dm” S- “Ay Ay Ay!” (Crazy Train)
T- (dramatic) “MAMA!” S- “Oooooo!” (Queen- Bohemian Rhapsody)
T- “What is love?” S- “Baby don’t hurt me!” (Haddaway)

⚠️ Remember, this is a management tool to help control the chaos that comes from teaching tiny humans. If you teach middle school and up, they might not be tiny humans, but they’re still kids. Have fun with it and make sure you MODEL , MODEL , MODEL .

If you try to incorporate an attention-getter without setting the expectations and modeling, there’s a good chance it won’t be successful.

WRITTEN BY – HEATHER WAGONER

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